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Hard to believe I used to be a writer of Inuyasha fics, but here I am, reading yours. Believe it or not, this is the very first time I've read a Naruto fic. The closest I've ever been was one called "The Great Ramen Day" that I found while searching for Hikaru no Go fics, where Hikaru and Naruto go around trying to see who can eat more ramen, and eventually end up having to call Sasuke and Akira to take them home.. Anyway!! I really like this fic, and I hope to see you updating it soon. Your grammar and spelling are much better than many of the fics I've read, and believe me, I've read a lot of them in my 3 or 4 years of being an author. This fic made me laugh a lot, and I can't help but wonder what their papers will be like... Sasuke: "I learned that Sakura is obsessed with me and imagines what my room is like in her spare time. I also learned that Naruto is a good kisser and that, while he can't keep his apartment clean to save his life, I like it that way." Sakura: "I learned that Naruto's father's in jail, and I decided to be rude to him less for other people's beliefs, and more for his own annoying habits. I also learned that Sasuke likes to go to the bathroom with Naruto, and he has a hot brother." Naruto: "I learned that Sakura can drool more than most dogs when in the presence of Sasuke's brother, and that Sasuke is a pervert. And that, oddly, I don't mind. BUT I'M NOT GAY!! Dammit, don't you dare think that, Kakashi!!" *laughs* anyway, I'll be checking this story often in hopes of seeing an update.

oooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I looooooove this story, it's so great and you're such a great writer!! I love you! *glomps* I especially like your writing style it's enrapturing! sorry bout' the other review I was overzealous and hit tab too many times *sweatdrop*

Continue pretty pelase asap.....umm no pressure. ^.^;

LOVe Dose Itahi[sp]like Naruto?
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THANKS!!!!!!!!!!

REally really good job, still...I think I've reviewed three times, and I'm still saying the same things. @_@ How uncreative of me.

But, again, really great job. You're a great writer. Naruto is just...adorable in this fic, and so is Sasuke,well...Sasuke's never "adorable" y'know, but, he just seems...I dunno, more...gentle, y'know? (I'm trying not to ramble though) Were you aiming for that? Coz, your characterizing of them(as well as everyone else) is REALLY REALLY great. Many a fic I've found myself asking "Would *insert name* REALLY do that?"
But not for this fic, (once again) KILLER job. You Go Girl!

Might I just add a big THANK YOU for toning down the ItaSasu? I'm such a loser for being a bit hung up about it, but hey, 's all good, at least like all the others have said, and well as yourself, there will be only hints that can be taken in anyway.

This chapter was... awesome. I literally squealed when I saw that you had updated. I know I've said this before, but I can't help but adore Naruto more and more, as the story progresses. He's so spaztic, yet oh so lovable!

I'm excited to see what else the story will bring...the next one promies to be exciting! ( A date! What will Naruto say? What will he do? =D )

Yay, another chapter!
You know, I'm starting to wonder how Sasuke will react to Itachi's unbrotherly attentions (depending on how you plan to write that). I mean, having a sibling come onto you has got to be scary as hell, esp. with Itachi as the sibling.
And Naruto's so cute when he's trying to be a tease...such a good tease he is too! I can't wait for more! And you're right, writing is a huge stress relief for me and I'd imagine for many other writers too.
I also love what kind of tatoo you got. That's so cool! ^_^
Keep writing more chapters, I can't wait for them since your writing is great. And don't worry about stretching your chapters longer than you want them to go. I did that with Emerald Isle and now I'm having to take a break from it and regroup. But I digress...
Oh, and make sure Houseki can get your YIM id. She talks to EVERYONE! She even got me out of my shell. She'll most likely pester you into joining her club, where you'll meet lots of other interesting people.
Ja!

Hi ^_^ Wonderful chapter! I feel honored that my review prompted you to get writing ^__^ *HUGS back*

And you definitely transformed that bit of "uchihacest" into something easily interpretted in a number of ways. I'm sure your readers will be pleased. ^^ What I really like about this chapter is Naruto and Sasuke's ability to simply BE with each other without that sexual element (which is there, of course, hehee, just not prevalent). I was also rather endeared by Naruto's initial enthusiasm to show Sasuke his house and then suddenly his incredible self-consciousness about it.

One thing I REALLY love about this story is Naruto's little inner monologue/denial session (LOL) at the beginning of each chapter. They're hilarious and always makes me smile ^^

Hi ^_^ I just recently found your story (I really ought to search for new stories more often, lol) but I'm really, really enjoying it! I love Naruto's sarcasm and dry wit. I love the pace you've set for them because, hey, they're guys and guys are horny a lot XD, even Naruto who is just discovering his sexuality. In any case, as far as ItaSasu goes...well, I've never been a fan of this seeing as I like to think Itachi has SOME semblance of humanity in him (which is so misguided, I know, haha) but yeah. If it's one-sided and nothing happens, then hey, go for it! Especially if you think it'll add to the plot.

I also really loved that we knew right from the start that Sasuke liked Naruto. It enjoy fics where Sasuke is the one pursuing Naruto because while Sasuke is an ass, he's twice as bad when he hasn't yet realized he wants to screw Naruto into the floor. Yeah. Sorry for the vivid imagery there. SO not intended. hahaha...

Anyway, I do hope you will continue this and that you'll update soon ^^ I'm really loving it.

In addition, I just wanted to add that I, like any normal person, skip over your review responses but I do read all the rest of your author's notes. I do not mind at ALL your review responses b/c I really like it too when an author replies to my review. I actually did the same (responded to reviews) in the earlier chapters of one of my fics but the fic has gotten so long and the reviews too many to do this anymore, but I never got any complaints about it. I'm sorry some of your readers don't feel the same way. ^__^ Don't let them bother you. For every one bad review, there are a dozen to make up for it. And those are the ones that should really count, right? ^__^

sorry me again ^^; I just wanted to add that I also really love that you're going to make their relationship equal in terms of top and bottom and all that. I also feel that the boys just aren't suited for either role permanently. They're both strong and stubborn and can dominate and submit when it suits them ^_^ Yay you!