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I didn't demand an apology, I'd just hoped that you would. No I don't know loser but I feel if people just let others get away with being rude without making comment then they will never learn to be polite. Loser comment wasn't written in a way that could be considered badgering, they just left a comment and to just say "bite me" but not acknowledge the fact that they did compliment your story is rude. I'm sorry but it is. I understand that you don't feel the need to apologize and I'm glad that you did acknowledge my compliment instead of just blowing me off like you did Loser

Thanks for the new chapter. ^^ I'm really enoying the story, which is surprising, I normally hate AU fics, I'm not sure why, but I do. You've kept pretty close to the characters, which I'm always grateful for. I'm reviewing because of what you said about doing ItsSasu... It squicks me, but if you're not gonna have anything hardcore I couldn't imagine it being a problem. Things like that do add to the dynamics of a story. Anyway, keep up the good work and post again soon. ^^
~Hawk

Whee! Poor Sasuke...But, way to go Naruto!
Please don't listen to the people who complain, your story is really, very well written.
when you said you were thinking about discontinuing it I nearly had a heart attack.
But on the the story,
I loved the way you portray Naruto and sasuke's budding relationship, and I can't wait to see what Itachi will do.
Keep up the good work!
=^_^=

First off, I like your story very much and I hope you continue to write it. Next, to all the reveiwers who are complaining about the feedback: Grow up! It is not difficult to skip over the stuff you do not want to read. It takes you more time to complain about the reviews than it would to skip over the whole thing. This author happens to mark things very clearly so that you are able to skip around the stuff you don't want to read. Stop being lazy. Finally please continue at least for the sake of my sanity. ^_^

When I first started reading this I thought it was going to be like a quick romance with them both screwing and saying " I love you"..yeah...sappy ending lolz. But then it started getting intense and dude it was nothing like a sappy ending lolz. Actually there shouldn't be a ending for this story! I forbid it. xD Really so far I like the plot. Although I feel sorry for Naruto because he has to deal with all that pain. Oo is his papi gonna make an appearance in the story? That would be such a shocker! hee hee....
Hmm aren't Itachi and Sasuke brothers? Lol Itachi likes wittle Sasuke-kun? awww...incest...me likey. As long as there hot and stuff..I won't mind. And yes I agree, I usually do like Naruto on the bottom and Sasuke on top. *shrugs* but I like varieties. ^^. Especially rape...got rape? 0.0..omg is sasuke going to be rape of half-raped by Itachi?! Just curious. lolz.
Oh yeah at first when i read this I did think your reviews were long..honestly. But you know i didn't really care as long as you still continued this story. I enjoy reading this story very much. It'll be a bummer if you stopped now. Great story! O btw..do you read kingdom hearts? ><; that rocks too.. lolz. Can't wait to read the next chappy! ^.^

Wow. I am offically hooked on this story! The story line is really good and I like the fact that you are not pushing the characters together too quickly. I also really like the way you characterize Naruto and Sasuke in this story, it is very refressing. I was a little worried when you mentioned how you didn't think you were going to continue this wonderful story due to a few losers that sent retarded reviews. I'll get on my hands and knees to beg you to complete this story. I really can't wait to see where Naruto's and Sasuke's relationship will go. I hope to read more from you soon. If it is at all possible, could you possibly send me an e-mail when you update?

Your fan,

rAiNwAtEr

I will be sure to review again as soon as you post another chapter.

Hey

I like your story though one of your review kind of soured me a bit. I was curious about the complaints you said you've gotten about review responses so I went to look for loser81's review. What they wrote did not warrant the rude response you gave. They complimented your story, you should be happy with that. People do give other opinions and I think as long as it's not written as a flame you shouldn't respond the way you did. If I was loser I would stop reading your story immediately just because of that response. Now don't take the review badly and think that you should give up the story, but I would apologize to loser because they didn't deserve a "bite me". Maybe thank you for your compliment but I like writing review responses so I'm not going to change it. To talk about your story I do like it and I hope you continue to write it and update soon. I hope to see an apology to loser in the next chapter but really its your choice. I just thought that was really rude and unnecessary. Oh and btw I do agree with loser on one thing, your chapters are kind of short. I don't have a problem with the review responses, I actually do feel special when I see an author has responded to something I said but I do also wish the chapters were longer.

Soory be busy love it please pleas update a s p

THANK!!!!!!!!

“You’re far too stealthy for them. You should be a ninja!” that line had me crackin up...it sounds like something i'd say which makes me laugh more lol i'm glad you're makin it an equal partnership..it is well overplayed w/ naruto being stuck uke. my story seems to be coming along like yours, now that I notice. Naruto is a bit uke-ish and sasuke seme-, but in the end, Naruto will have the upper hand...well, at some points..then gaara will, and then sasuke, and yeah...m/m/m fics are kind of hard to write...deciding on who gets to be seme/uke/seme/uke lol yikes..

you're also makin sasuke kind of sweet in this..i like sweet sasuke ^__^ he doesn't always have to be a bastard....or a dumb bastard (See Chasing Naruto) lmao

Ah if you'd love to chat with a few fic-ka's on the fundamentals of writing a Naruto fanfic *lmao* then drop me a line on YIM: inuyashas_hoseki69 it's quite interesting to say the least the things that can come out of a simple conversation ^__~

a side note: i usually don't like author's replying to reviewers, but your notes are usually pretty funny, and informative of your thoughts and ideas as well as your life..but my one complaint, which i'm sure is every one else's who totally digs this fic...chaps need to be waaay longer lol i know my first chap was sooo short, but i try to make em longer and longer...ah but you are the fic-ka and the story is in your control ^__~ I will just have to sit back and wait for the up'ds :p

anywho..sugoi chap! Keep it up! Motto motto! ^__~

Mata!

I really like this story and I dont mind you taking your time with writing it or how you protray the characters since what you have written so far is Great! I look forward to the next chapter *smiles while giving good-guy pose*