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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's another wonderful chapter! I love this fic, it's so hilarious ^^ Please don't ever, EVER discontinue it. I love the way Naruto is so confused about his sexuality and keeps trying to deny that he's gay. I like a pushy Sasuke too. Finally a Sasuke who's not afraid to let everyone know about their relationship ^^ I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!
About the ItaSasu thing right, actually, it might be more IC to have Itachi interested in Naruto instead coz Sasuke is the one who's supposed to look up to Itachi. But well, it's your fic so don't be bothered by our opinions. Much.
About the one charac dominantly being seme or uke part right, I don't know. The two homosexual relationships I know of both work on that principle. ^^ Also, I tend to go along more with the Japanese's view on this kind of relationships, because they have quite a fixed view of who's the seme and who's the uke. It's quite different from the Western's view so it's more natural for me to think of Sasuke as the seme and Naruto as the uke. But once again, it's your fic so it's entirely up to you.
Isn't that a long review? Hehe, I can't wait to see what everyone's reaction to their relationship will be. Will you introducing other charac? Like Neji, Ten Ten, Gaara? This is really an excellent fic. I so love you for writing this ^^ Update soon ne!
About the ItaSasu thing right, actually, it might be more IC to have Itachi interested in Naruto instead coz Sasuke is the one who's supposed to look up to Itachi. But well, it's your fic so don't be bothered by our opinions. Much.
About the one charac dominantly being seme or uke part right, I don't know. The two homosexual relationships I know of both work on that principle. ^^ Also, I tend to go along more with the Japanese's view on this kind of relationships, because they have quite a fixed view of who's the seme and who's the uke. It's quite different from the Western's view so it's more natural for me to think of Sasuke as the seme and Naruto as the uke. But once again, it's your fic so it's entirely up to you.
Isn't that a long review? Hehe, I can't wait to see what everyone's reaction to their relationship will be. Will you introducing other charac? Like Neji, Ten Ten, Gaara? This is really an excellent fic. I so love you for writing this ^^ Update soon ne!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stupid people complaining about reviewers responces...Because this is a great, very awesome, story. And I hate for those annoying people to ruin it *flicks at them* Glad you you decided to continue it though! ^^ I love Naruto's little thoughts at the beginning of each chapter, of course he's not gay! He's just, uh, heterosexually-challenged! ^^
I can't wait to see what happens as the plot 'thickens'. The onesided ItaSasu looks like it will make perfect sense the way you're protraying it! Very good job at keeping the characters personalities intact while still making them unpredictable enough to be interesting! A very good talent, that.
With a little bit of fawning over and worshiping you, I'll eagerly await the next chapter!
I can't wait to see what happens as the plot 'thickens'. The onesided ItaSasu looks like it will make perfect sense the way you're protraying it! Very good job at keeping the characters personalities intact while still making them unpredictable enough to be interesting! A very good talent, that.
With a little bit of fawning over and worshiping you, I'll eagerly await the next chapter!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An interesting story, I do like it. I think that a little ItaSasu could add to the plot nicely. As for the whole having one partner dominate in a relationship all the time in fanfics, well that's just how they are wrote. It's almost a tradition in yaoi fanfics. If you write your story to be more realistic in the sharing of dominate part I think that would be great, I would like to see more of that in fanfics. Also don't let complains in reviews get you down, if you want to response to your reviewers that's cool. Anyway, like I said you have a good story here. It seems to flow at a good pace and everything. So keep up the good work, I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naruto should tell Sasuke that he just doesn't want people to hate him more for being with their precious Sasuke. I hope Sasu can help Naru with his self-confidence, I am ready for at least Saku to find out and be threatened to silence by Sasu.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Took me long enough to decide to read your fic and I'm glad I did read it. Please, update soon!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE DAMN YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! gomen nasai, but i realy like this book so please update.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, but I wish that the chapters were a little longer. I feel like I am just getting into it when you stop. But I am still looking forward to the next chapter, of course! ^___^
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey there!! i just missed a bunch of your updates!! but i'm all catched up and ready to review ^^ I totally love Naruto's little POV blurb at the beginning of each chapter. it's so amusing to read. also, the steamy make out session in the car was hot. super. i'm a little anxious about the upcoming itasasu, but nevertheless i'm looking forward to the update. keep up the great work, as well as the review responses. i personally favor them. i feel can feel the love from those =D
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uhmm... update soon?.... well, i'm sure everybody's already giving you good comments so i don't think i need to give the details again. I definitely love the flow of your story, keep it up!
Then, I read some of your rants and I would like to address the one regarding your age... You really don't have to worry about being 20. I had the same problem before, i even decided that if i were to die, "what a better way to die at 19!" well that's what I thought. but even so, I still ended up being 20 now!
Hey, hey! don't fret, my friends and I thought up of a solution for this, and its really funny but still a good Idea! don't say TWENTY... that's a very lame age, instead go with TWENTEEN!
SEE? welcome back to the teen's world! ^___^
you might even want to continue that! like twenteen-one, twenteen-two....and so on!
Gambatte!
Then, I read some of your rants and I would like to address the one regarding your age... You really don't have to worry about being 20. I had the same problem before, i even decided that if i were to die, "what a better way to die at 19!" well that's what I thought. but even so, I still ended up being 20 now!
Hey, hey! don't fret, my friends and I thought up of a solution for this, and its really funny but still a good Idea! don't say TWENTY... that's a very lame age, instead go with TWENTEEN!
SEE? welcome back to the teen's world! ^___^
you might even want to continue that! like twenteen-one, twenteen-two....and so on!
Gambatte!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot. That was a good chapter. I like the whole cafeteria thing. But I think Naruto shouldn't be ashamed or worried about anything. Who cares what those people say?! As long as he's happy with shmexy shmexy sasuke, then it's all good, right?!!?! ^_^;;
You do great with the characters personalities too. Lol, Shikamaru was right on the dot. :x
Can't wait for your next update.
You do great with the characters personalities too. Lol, Shikamaru was right on the dot. :x
Can't wait for your next update.