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First, I want to say that you shouldn't pay attention to jerks who whine about the length of the review responses. I personally thank its a nice touch. Second, I really like this story and hope you aren't planning on discontinuing it! I really like the way you write the characters and i find naruto's first person intros to each chapter hilarious. Also I want to say i agree with the uke seme question, what is the deal with yaoi writers being obsessed with one person being in the role all the time. Anyway, thanks for writing and i hope you update soon.

:D I'm proud of you for standing up for yourself. If you want to reply to what your reviewers say, kudos to you. I, personally, prefer you do reply. Makes me feel like someone cares what I say. :'(

But, alas, that is that. This chapter I felt was particularly "spiffy" (I ran out of exciting words to describe it). :D Naruto's confusion and overall awkwardness is SO yummy and I'm eating it up. Sasuke is just a pervert. :] Not that I mind...

Hurray for chapter six!!! ^___^ Whee!!! :) I'd absolutely love to email you -- though right now, because of the finals here in my university, I believe that'd be quite impossible x___x This chapter is a bit mellow compared to the others, which usually involved Sasuke *molesting* Naru-chan XD [See, no complaints? ^_____^] Hehehe, Shikamaru's a psychic!!! :P Though it shouldn't be a big surprise since he's a smartass GENIUS :) Hmmm.... a meeting for a project!!! Sakura and Itachi appears!!! *dark storm clouds hovering* LOL I already gave my opinions about the ItaSasu thing so yeah... :D Very busy right now, so... no long reviews [aka rambling] this time ^^;;

Keep up the good work!!! ^___^ There're lots of SasuNaru hints all over the anime [it's practically a CANON pairing XD] so---there's your inspiration!!! XD XD

---longer chapters next time, please? *puppy dog eyes*--
---whoever dislikes seeing so many review responses should just SKIP the segments about review responses. it's not hard [though it may be for some puny-minded people] to know when the review responses start and the chapters end--
---So does that mean that Naruto would go out on a date with Sasuke???? Since he didn't kiss him, right, right??? ^_________^ *fangirlish squeals, while thinking of a dark, dark cinema and some hot, hot make-out scenes, and then faints from nosebleed [too much imagination]*

Good luck with writing more!!! [quests of Sasu-kun to make Naru-chan his! LOL] *more cookies for your amazingly great work*

>> Seto's Darkness <<

personally, i don't care what you wanna do with notes and stuff. *you* are the author, so that means you get to do whatever you want. :)
like you said, those who want to read it will, and those who don't can just skip it.

i really like what you've been doing with this story. naruto's blazing denial was a funny way to do things, that and laying all blame on sasuke. i really hope you aren't ending it here though, i feel like the story just got going! but i have really enjoyed what you've written so far.

Ahh, another chapter! I literally squeed when I saw it.

It doesn'tmatter what people say about the amount of review responses, heck, I appreciate them. Especially because I only review once in a while and therefore, getting a nice response from a review I nervously made makes me feel alot better. People are so tetchy! Jeeze, if you don't want to read the responses, just skip 'em, it only takes a few seconds.

I really liked this chapter. The comments you added in were cute (ie/ about ramen and the continuation of Naruto being *not gay*) but you still kept it so it wasn't overly humerous or making Naruto look like a dolt. The small act of running his fingers through Sasuke's hair or getting chokedup about a piece of pizza was lovely! I'm a total hopeless romantic and have wayyyy too much empathy (which is why I can't read angst. Boo hoo.) but tht gave me the warm fuzzies.

Still envy your writing style!

_Amanda

Hiya, been reading your story in the shadows and not reviewing....shame on me. I like you story. I love the way that you have Naruto and Sasuke acting. About your idea for slight Itachi/Sasuke....I don't see a problem with it; as long as it isn't....um....detailed, I guess. Slight is good, alot is not (oh god, I'm rhyming....that's scary). And for the review responces....tell everyone to f***k off. It's your story, and you can do what you want. You want to answer reviews...go ahead. Stupid people and bothersome complaints. Anyway, nice story...keep it up.

This story is really good. Everything is moving naturally and thats what i look for in stories and yours certainly has it. Please do ignore those assholes complaining about the size of your author's notes. I bet if you didn't thank anyone they'd secretly think that your so cold, not thanking reviewers or anything. Sorry but i really can't stand bold people like that. It's you're story so do what the fuck you want!! Anyway Sasuke is just wonderfully sexy in this story and i like your descriptions very much. Keep up the great work!! I'll be looking out for an update!!

I'm again. I went back and read over what you had actually said at the end of the chapter (I have a tendancy to ignore things the first time around) but needless to say, I thought I'd give you some feedback on on what you actually wanted feedback on. If that makes any sense. Yes, another review from the creepy non-reviewer girl.

I have a gigantic problem with Itasasu. But I won't in this story if you've already decided it's going to be one-sided and nothing is going to happen. I can also see how Naruto would be 'uke' and Sasuke would be 'seme' and yeah, if you end up going through with a lemon and then a second or third lemon, you could always switch it around and warm the readers if it isn't their thing. I dislike stories where it's permanent positions as well.

Cough. Oh yes, I also went back and read a few reviews from the last chapter as well as my own. I reallylike the car scene. Mmm, steamy windows. I also liked the very end, where Sasuke cops a feel. I have a giant butt fetish (I have no idea why) and it always seems to come out in rp's, so thank you for feeding my butt-fetish! Lol.

Gone again.

I'm SO glad you see that you havn't given up on this story! The update was such a nice surprise! I liked how you had Naruto act after the kiss and with Sasuke at school. It seemed... very natural for him. I'm glad you don't have him accepting his sexuality, or sasuality (sorry, had to say it!) so soon, and so eaisly. I have to admit, ItaSasu kind of squicks me, but hey, you said it's one-sided, so it's all good! *cheer*

I'm not sure if i commented on the car scene so far, but I have to admit, it was VERY well done. I can't wait to read the lemon!

I just have a quick question. Everyone hates Naruto because of his dad right? Will we ever meet his dad, and/or find out why he did what he did?

THIS STORY IS WONDERFUL!! and bye the way I love your auther responses i think its neet most authers dont bother with it but you know ^^ O! this is the first Naruto story i`v ever read and I LOVE IT im sooo going to read more could u update soon? pweez? Ill be checking in to see ^^ wonderful story