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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh the hotness! the beautiful beautiful hotness! i love where this story is going please continue ^_^
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When are you posting more???????
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm, I don't want to offend you or anything, just consider this a well-meant advice: If you want to respond to every reviewer personally, why not per e-mail/mailing-list? That way, everyone would be happy. ^_^
LOL, I hope you won't hate me for my little review now, won't do it again. Promise.
PS: I don't think this will change anything, but I was starting to like your little story. 'You really sure you wanna abandon the fic?
LOL, I hope you won't hate me for my little review now, won't do it again. Promise.
PS: I don't think this will change anything, but I was starting to like your little story. 'You really sure you wanna abandon the fic?
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good, I like were its heading so far. The only complaint I have is the length of the chapters. Each chapter is very short (excluding your writings on top and the reviews below). The reviews...honestly shouldn't be so long.... i mean..the whole freaking review part is longer than the chapter! Well..update soon its very good.
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wanna marry me? X3
cuz wih ur last A/N I started to <3 you like I luv ur FF XD
how u handled Dawn X33 *chu~~~s*
bu~~~t back to the Fic
it's kinda... awesome :O
though I can't really put my finger on what exactly I like most X3
it's just the whole impression I get from your story X3
can't really say anything bad about it O_o
I just like your style of writing... and the "Naruto-thought-part" at the beginning of each chapter...
nice idea, and... well...
I just get this "whoa" kinda feeling, which makes me wanna read more and more X3
hope u'll update soon ;X
bye~~~
Lithi ^^/)
cuz wih ur last A/N I started to <3 you like I luv ur FF XD
how u handled Dawn X33 *chu~~~s*
bu~~~t back to the Fic
it's kinda... awesome :O
though I can't really put my finger on what exactly I like most X3
it's just the whole impression I get from your story X3
can't really say anything bad about it O_o
I just like your style of writing... and the "Naruto-thought-part" at the beginning of each chapter...
nice idea, and... well...
I just get this "whoa" kinda feeling, which makes me wanna read more and more X3
hope u'll update soon ;X
bye~~~
Lithi ^^/)
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoah o.o I forgot how hot sasuxnaru could be o.o (I've resided in the sasuxnaru fandom before, but now I kinda moved over to Dir en grey). And whoah o.o I neeeeeeed you to update this! I also need a panty refreshment, cause that lime was hot! o.o I still have my mouth hanging open! (seriously >_< I just noticed that) Fwee! Just respond to reviews! It's nice and people who dislike it can just go to hell! *shakes fist*
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wah! I just started reading this, but that was hot. *fans self* I like ditzy naruto. He's somewhat OOC but very endearing ^^ keep up the good work!
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(laughs at response to Dawn)
You tell her!! Yeah!
You tell her!! Yeah!
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well first off I'd like to say, for only five chapters so far and still incomplete this is probably the best Naruto story I have read. This story has kept my attention and I am constantly wondering what is going to happen next. I hope you update soon.
Nakazato Mitsuki ^^
Nakazato Mitsuki ^^
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was fun. You have a talent for the more intimate scenes. I like Naruto's internal struggle, but I really like how he is finally coming to terms with his new feelings. Keep up the good work.