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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I can't wait for your next update. Please update soon! You kick ass.
-Black
-Black
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!! you are awesome!! PLEASE DO SO UPDATE SOON!!!! FLIPPIN AWESOME!!!!!! And the Iruka part was wonderful!!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok good story but i'm anoyed at how much a/n you have i really don't like it a very little amount is ok but that's ten times way to pushing it
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like long author notes....Anyway, I'm a freshman in college.
Sasuke and Naruto are just so cute aren't they? And your mom found your stuff? Ack! Scary ^^;;
Sasuke and Naruto are just so cute aren't they? And your mom found your stuff? Ack! Scary ^^;;
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohooo, finally some action!
Um, right.
First of all, you never cease to practically glew my eyes to the screen with mostly simple words... dunno, but your story gets to me. ^^x May have mentioned it before, I'm usually into the plain PWP stuff, but you have a way of writing... that shows me once more how my vocabulary lacks adjectives. *lol* It's fascinating and sometimes it gives me this tickling feeling when you just know that ist HAS to be like this, that Sasuke has to kiss Naruto right now and hold him close and it's enough and perfect and it doesn't need anything more to be just right... something like this. ^_^x
One more thing: I like your Author's notes. I like this stuff in general. And I also like it how you respond to reviewers. *laughs* Even if it's just a quick 'thanks', it's still cool. Whoever's complaining: never mind. ^^x
Keep up the good work!
~Horizont
Um, right.
First of all, you never cease to practically glew my eyes to the screen with mostly simple words... dunno, but your story gets to me. ^^x May have mentioned it before, I'm usually into the plain PWP stuff, but you have a way of writing... that shows me once more how my vocabulary lacks adjectives. *lol* It's fascinating and sometimes it gives me this tickling feeling when you just know that ist HAS to be like this, that Sasuke has to kiss Naruto right now and hold him close and it's enough and perfect and it doesn't need anything more to be just right... something like this. ^_^x
One more thing: I like your Author's notes. I like this stuff in general. And I also like it how you respond to reviewers. *laughs* Even if it's just a quick 'thanks', it's still cool. Whoever's complaining: never mind. ^^x
Keep up the good work!
~Horizont
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!That begins to be more and more intersting!^^*although the chapters are a bit short but it depends of the author's inspiration,ne^^;*
Itachi's in the story too hehe;I wonder if there will be some people of Akatsuki too...And just this last thing*erps...not a greta review isn't it^^;*I love the short paragraph with Naruto's thoughts!^^Really funny!
Ja ne
Itachi's in the story too hehe;I wonder if there will be some people of Akatsuki too...And just this last thing*erps...not a greta review isn't it^^;*I love the short paragraph with Naruto's thoughts!^^Really funny!
Ja ne
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hoi hoi! I'm really enjoying this story so far, and I hope you don't decide to drop it. It may be cliche' with the school stuff, but you still have origionality in it and it makes it readable and enjoyable :p A stalking Sasuke is a fun Sasuke, inne *smirks* Even though I enjoy a seme Naruto more than a Sasuke one, if the story is done well, it doesn't make a difference. And I'm still reading, so that should say something, ne? ^__^ Anywho, keep up the good work, on all your fics and I hope to see more soon!
Matane!
Matane!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv ur writting please continue and...............write more asap pleeeeeeeeeeeeease
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo! We're finally getting to understand what's going on between them. I still love the way you have Naruto's thoughts run through the chapter. It's really entertaining.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Five was well done and compelling inan underwater way,does that make sence?Can't wait!