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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure I already review your story, but I have to tell you, it's one of my favorite! Really! I've read tones and tones of SasuNaru (ok, so I read only that, and?) and yours is really good. Your writing skills are good and I love the way you make Sasuke and Naruto, they're exactly how I like to see their relationship, any other way can go to little ooc to very ooc (like a NaruSasu is). It usually unerve me stories with short chapters but as in every chapter you turn my intestines into jelly (you know what I mean) It doesn't really matter. I think the one who told you to put this in a community of SasuNaru was right, they might like it very much, not cause I like it, but it's well done, not ooc, funny and hot, what else a SasuNaru fan can ask for? I have nothing else to tell you as suggestion (I love this chapter, the car is such a kinky place and we can feel the sexual tension in it). So, please continue (I hate to tell that but I hate more when a good story finish on trash) and good luck! Love ya!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU ended the chapie.. damn! o wel..
update soon 'cause I love the story... seriusely!
update soon 'cause I love the story... seriusely!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOODNESS! I can't believe you're the ooKeiraoo (I know I did that totally wrong) who reviews my story! That is so awesome! Before I even read your comment to me I read that you used to post under that name and I got totally excited. I absolutely love your story. As a matter of fact, this last chapter was so amazing that I was getting jealous about how easily the make out scenes seem to be for you to write. They are by FAR the hardest part of my story. If I had more money I would be trying to hire you to write them for me. I should be posting another chapter in a day or two and the lemony of it is not what I want it to be. I sure hope my beta can help me with it or I might as well just link to your story and tell people "If you want to read something sexy, go here." ;P
Anywho, I really really really really really loved this chapter and I really love your story too! When Sasuke started revealing more of his inner self I almost fell out of my chair. It's always so great when people give him a bit more character. Oh, and the funniest thing hands down was:
"Get in" when used in reference to stalker boy's car meant either a)Get into this dark vehicle with tinted windows so that I can molest you without getting caught, or b)Get into this dark vehicle with tinted windows so that I can murder you without getting caught.
Neither is good.
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I seriously almost wet myself when I read that! It was incredably funny to me for some reason.
Oh well, I've probably worn out my review welcome, although if you're like me, the long reviews are what keep you going, so you might not mind. Please update soon! This is awesome and I can't wait to read more. Congrats on your birthday!
Anywho, I really really really really really loved this chapter and I really love your story too! When Sasuke started revealing more of his inner self I almost fell out of my chair. It's always so great when people give him a bit more character. Oh, and the funniest thing hands down was:
"Get in" when used in reference to stalker boy's car meant either a)Get into this dark vehicle with tinted windows so that I can molest you without getting caught, or b)Get into this dark vehicle with tinted windows so that I can murder you without getting caught.
Neither is good.
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I seriously almost wet myself when I read that! It was incredably funny to me for some reason.
Oh well, I've probably worn out my review welcome, although if you're like me, the long reviews are what keep you going, so you might not mind. Please update soon! This is awesome and I can't wait to read more. Congrats on your birthday!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and consider your story Recommend! :)
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>.< hot stuff! updateupdateupdate!!!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
maaah, I really love this story and that scene in the car was just HAWT! You could always make sakura wak in on the, and she'd be like *GASP O_______O* and they wouldn't even notice till she faints xD or soemthing like that... you don't hafta, it was just a suggestion =3 really hope you update soon ^^
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that my review made you giggle. I just tend to babble and yeah... ^__^ So, I'm going to start babbling again about my thoughts and likes/dislikes [gasp! there are dislikes?!] in this chapter :D
OMG I love it!!!!!!! *squeals* the car make-out scene is SO kinky *drools* I think I forgot to say this in my review last chappie [since I was *too* caught up in the babble about Uchihacest...] but I love the way you make Iruka seem to have 'accidentally' blurted out his relationship with Kakashi *giggles* KakaIru is one of my fave pairings in Naruto too.. AND I totally love your Shikamaru *hugs plushie* Lazy smart-ass... Anyhow, I love the way you 'characterize' Sasuke--because you leave almost everything to the imagination of the readers --and Naruto. I could say that it's a wise thing to do since mysteriousness and COOLness is just-so-Sasuke ^^;; Itachi calling Sasuke just because of the five minute lateness is totally... erm... Uchihacest-y? err.. Itachi really struck me as someone who'd follow 'rules' and become the strict 'father and mother model' for dear Sasuke ^__^
I'm glad that Naruto *finally* seemed to have made up his mind [even though he hasn't thought-through it yet] about his feelings for Sasuke. The way you describe his denial and indignace about being equally attracted to Sasuke, and the way his actions and thoughts seem to clash and stuff, and the way you portray his inner turmoil about the onslaught of feelings and emotions thrown at him by the overzealous [overSEXY!] Uchiha :P --I'm talking about Sasuke XD
Happy late birthday! ^__^ nineteen is such a great age [though, I'm biased. I like ALL odd numbers :D] Anyway, I digress [I've been digressing at the first paragraphs too..] So, uhh. I hope there are more often updates! I am also in my freshmen year at the university and it's so damn BUSY! Hehehe, I still find plenty of time reading and reviewing though.. I understand that studies would always come first [that's why I'm holding out my fics till the winter break and just concentrating on reviews]. Though, if you want some plot ideas, feel free to contact me! XD XD my email's the one written above, and I could give you lots of things to think about adding this fic :D
Good luck with writing MORE! :) Waiting for the good stuff :P *cough*more yaoi*cough*
SasuNaru RULES! :D
....Hey, the kissing scenes are really... *passes out from nosebleed*
After an hour... *recovers* uhhhh... just... write MORE!!!!! ^______________^ *cookies for studying and writing the fic!*
>> Seto's Darkness <<
OMG I love it!!!!!!! *squeals* the car make-out scene is SO kinky *drools* I think I forgot to say this in my review last chappie [since I was *too* caught up in the babble about Uchihacest...] but I love the way you make Iruka seem to have 'accidentally' blurted out his relationship with Kakashi *giggles* KakaIru is one of my fave pairings in Naruto too.. AND I totally love your Shikamaru *hugs plushie* Lazy smart-ass... Anyhow, I love the way you 'characterize' Sasuke--because you leave almost everything to the imagination of the readers --and Naruto. I could say that it's a wise thing to do since mysteriousness and COOLness is just-so-Sasuke ^^;; Itachi calling Sasuke just because of the five minute lateness is totally... erm... Uchihacest-y? err.. Itachi really struck me as someone who'd follow 'rules' and become the strict 'father and mother model' for dear Sasuke ^__^
I'm glad that Naruto *finally* seemed to have made up his mind [even though he hasn't thought-through it yet] about his feelings for Sasuke. The way you describe his denial and indignace about being equally attracted to Sasuke, and the way his actions and thoughts seem to clash and stuff, and the way you portray his inner turmoil about the onslaught of feelings and emotions thrown at him by the overzealous [overSEXY!] Uchiha :P --I'm talking about Sasuke XD
Happy late birthday! ^__^ nineteen is such a great age [though, I'm biased. I like ALL odd numbers :D] Anyway, I digress [I've been digressing at the first paragraphs too..] So, uhh. I hope there are more often updates! I am also in my freshmen year at the university and it's so damn BUSY! Hehehe, I still find plenty of time reading and reviewing though.. I understand that studies would always come first [that's why I'm holding out my fics till the winter break and just concentrating on reviews]. Though, if you want some plot ideas, feel free to contact me! XD XD my email's the one written above, and I could give you lots of things to think about adding this fic :D
Good luck with writing MORE! :) Waiting for the good stuff :P *cough*more yaoi*cough*
SasuNaru RULES! :D
....Hey, the kissing scenes are really... *passes out from nosebleed*
After an hour... *recovers* uhhhh... just... write MORE!!!!! ^______________^ *cookies for studying and writing the fic!*
>> Seto's Darkness <<
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that my review made you giggle. I just tend to babble and yeah... ^__^ So, I'm going to start babbling again about my thoughts and likes/dislikes [gasp! there are dislikes?!] in this chapter :D
OMG I love it!!!!!!! *squeals* the car make-out scene is SO kinky *drools* I think I forgot to say this in my review last chappie [since I was *too* caught up in the babble about Uchihacest...] but I love the way you make Iruka seem to have 'accidentally' blurted out his relationship with Kakashi *giggles* KakaIru is one of my fave pairings in Naruto too.. AND I totally love your Shikamaru *hugs plushie* Lazy smart-ass... Anyhow, I love the way you 'characterize' Sasuke--because you leave almost everything to the imagination of the readers --and Naruto. I could say that it's a wise thing to do since mysteriousness and COOLness is just-so-Sasuke ^^;; Itachi calling Sasuke just because of the five minute lateness is totally... erm... Uchihacest-y? err.. Itachi really struck me as someone who'd follow 'rules' and become the strict 'father and mother model' for dear Sasuke ^__^
I'm glad that Naruto *finally* seemed to have made up his mind [even though he hasn't thought-through it yet] about his feelings for Sasuke. The way you describe his denial and indignace about being equally attracted to Sasuke, and the way his actions and thoughts seem to clash and stuff, and the way you portray his inner turmoil about the onslaught of feelings and emotions thrown at him by the overzealous [overSEXY!] Uchiha :P --I'm talking about Sasuke XD
Happy late birthday! ^__^ nineteen is such a great age [though, I'm biased. I like ALL odd numbers :D] Anyway, I digress [I've been digressing at the first paragraphs too..] So, uhh. I hope there are more often updates! I am also in my freshmen year at the university and it's so damn BUSY! Hehehe, I still find plenty of time reading and reviewing though.. I understand that studies would always come first [that's why I'm holding out my fics till the winter break and just concentrating on reviews]. Though, if you want some plot ideas, feel free to contact me! XD XD my email's the one written above, and I could give you lots of things to think about adding this fic :D
Good luck with writing MORE! :) Waiting for the good stuff :P *cough*more yaoi*cough*
SasuNaru RULES! :D
....Hey, the kissing scenes are really... *passes out from nosebleed*
After an hour... *recovers* uhhhh... just... write MORE!!!!! ^______________^ *cookies for studying and writing the fic!*
>> Seto's Darkness <<
OMG I love it!!!!!!! *squeals* the car make-out scene is SO kinky *drools* I think I forgot to say this in my review last chappie [since I was *too* caught up in the babble about Uchihacest...] but I love the way you make Iruka seem to have 'accidentally' blurted out his relationship with Kakashi *giggles* KakaIru is one of my fave pairings in Naruto too.. AND I totally love your Shikamaru *hugs plushie* Lazy smart-ass... Anyhow, I love the way you 'characterize' Sasuke--because you leave almost everything to the imagination of the readers --and Naruto. I could say that it's a wise thing to do since mysteriousness and COOLness is just-so-Sasuke ^^;; Itachi calling Sasuke just because of the five minute lateness is totally... erm... Uchihacest-y? err.. Itachi really struck me as someone who'd follow 'rules' and become the strict 'father and mother model' for dear Sasuke ^__^
I'm glad that Naruto *finally* seemed to have made up his mind [even though he hasn't thought-through it yet] about his feelings for Sasuke. The way you describe his denial and indignace about being equally attracted to Sasuke, and the way his actions and thoughts seem to clash and stuff, and the way you portray his inner turmoil about the onslaught of feelings and emotions thrown at him by the overzealous [overSEXY!] Uchiha :P --I'm talking about Sasuke XD
Happy late birthday! ^__^ nineteen is such a great age [though, I'm biased. I like ALL odd numbers :D] Anyway, I digress [I've been digressing at the first paragraphs too..] So, uhh. I hope there are more often updates! I am also in my freshmen year at the university and it's so damn BUSY! Hehehe, I still find plenty of time reading and reviewing though.. I understand that studies would always come first [that's why I'm holding out my fics till the winter break and just concentrating on reviews]. Though, if you want some plot ideas, feel free to contact me! XD XD my email's the one written above, and I could give you lots of things to think about adding this fic :D
Good luck with writing MORE! :) Waiting for the good stuff :P *cough*more yaoi*cough*
SasuNaru RULES! :D
....Hey, the kissing scenes are really... *passes out from nosebleed*
After an hour... *recovers* uhhhh... just... write MORE!!!!! ^______________^ *cookies for studying and writing the fic!*
>> Seto's Darkness <<
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! I hope that even though college is such a pain +__+ you'll still find some time to satiate all of your readers' thirst for some more hot yaoi scenes between Sasuke and Naruto and much MORE high-quality scenes transpiring to make this absolutely wonderful story :) Keep up the good work. I shall forever wait for the next updates ^__^
....... I hope it's a LONGER! ^__^
+++++ illumi39 +++++
"I dreamed a Dream of blood and death."
....... I hope it's a LONGER! ^__^
+++++ illumi39 +++++
"I dreamed a Dream of blood and death."
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1. Sasuke is just so COOL and SEXY.
2. I love the way Naruto thinks and acts. DENIAL is so sweet :)
3. Shikamaru is the laziest ass in the show. And he's uber smart XP
4. Iruka is such a sweetie. Getting hyped up for nothing *snickers*
5. Itachi is a sexy bastard. Yesh.
6. Uchihacest is too dark. no offense. it's so DARK.
7. Kakashi.. hmm, maybe he planned this 'project' for Sasuke and Naruto?
8. Sakura.. well, even though she 'matured' [by an intsy bit] during the manga span of three years, there's still that Inner Sakura..
9. I hope you write more. We readers are in dire need of good SasuNaru fics.
10. I love you and this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugzzz* WRITE MORE SOON! ^___^
Inspiration for SasuNaru: watch the whole series, read the whole manga, watch the opening song videos [Seishun Kyousoukyoku by Sambomaster and Nami Kaze Satellite by Snorkel] --- SasuNaru hints are flying there everywhere. EVERYwhere. Especially the 5th opening song. I simply adore it. It gives off lots of SasuNaru-induced-warm-feelings ^__^
You ROCK!
2. I love the way Naruto thinks and acts. DENIAL is so sweet :)
3. Shikamaru is the laziest ass in the show. And he's uber smart XP
4. Iruka is such a sweetie. Getting hyped up for nothing *snickers*
5. Itachi is a sexy bastard. Yesh.
6. Uchihacest is too dark. no offense. it's so DARK.
7. Kakashi.. hmm, maybe he planned this 'project' for Sasuke and Naruto?
8. Sakura.. well, even though she 'matured' [by an intsy bit] during the manga span of three years, there's still that Inner Sakura..
9. I hope you write more. We readers are in dire need of good SasuNaru fics.
10. I love you and this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugzzz* WRITE MORE SOON! ^___^
Inspiration for SasuNaru: watch the whole series, read the whole manga, watch the opening song videos [Seishun Kyousoukyoku by Sambomaster and Nami Kaze Satellite by Snorkel] --- SasuNaru hints are flying there everywhere. EVERYwhere. Especially the 5th opening song. I simply adore it. It gives off lots of SasuNaru-induced-warm-feelings ^__^
You ROCK!