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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should be able to reply to as many reviews as you want. If the readers don't like seeing the review responses they don't have to read them. I'm glad you like to respond to each review. It shows that you care what people are saying about your story. Having complaints about you replying to reviews just astounds me. People have a lot of nerve. Anyway, I love your story and I like the clueless Naruto and stalkerish Sasuke. It's hot!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^.^
Borshica(I have no c lue where taht came from)
LOVE IT KEEP IT UP!
YEP YEP YEP this is really turning out great ^.^
Borshica(I have no c lue where taht came from)
LOVE IT KEEP IT UP!
YEP YEP YEP this is really turning out great ^.^
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I don't really know what to review, but I just thought I'd write a random post saying that my sister just got married on the 13th.
Oh, and as constructive criticism is generally sought by authors I could say... umm.. well, I can't think of anything, but I will point out that the doors in the front seats of cars tend to still open from the inside when they're locked. But then maybe Naruto doesn't know this >.>;;
Erm.. oh yes: Itachi's need to know exactly where Sasuke is / why he's late. 5 minutes isn't really something to be worked up over, especially because Sasuke's driving... I mean, traffic can't be the same everyday, and if you're unlucky at lights etc... Well, I just think the time-span's a little short. Otherwise though very amusing - I love how Naruto's mind and mouth seem to be at ends with each other. I hope you continue with the fic, though I can understand lack of motivation only too well >.>
Good luck with school! What are you studying? Your education should still be your priority :) (though we still want fics >.< :P)
-Shiin
Oh, and as constructive criticism is generally sought by authors I could say... umm.. well, I can't think of anything, but I will point out that the doors in the front seats of cars tend to still open from the inside when they're locked. But then maybe Naruto doesn't know this >.>;;
Erm.. oh yes: Itachi's need to know exactly where Sasuke is / why he's late. 5 minutes isn't really something to be worked up over, especially because Sasuke's driving... I mean, traffic can't be the same everyday, and if you're unlucky at lights etc... Well, I just think the time-span's a little short. Otherwise though very amusing - I love how Naruto's mind and mouth seem to be at ends with each other. I hope you continue with the fic, though I can understand lack of motivation only too well >.>
Good luck with school! What are you studying? Your education should still be your priority :) (though we still want fics >.< :P)
-Shiin
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Two hours away for a halloween party... sounds like Athens, maybe. =) I'm actually going there this year, haven't been sinse I was like... 16. Anyway, as for the fic, I like what you've got so far. Too bad Naru-chan didn't invite a steamy Uchiha into his empty apartment. That was a really hot little hint of citrus. Update when you've got time.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cool chapter. Hope to read more soon :D
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. Can I say I hope you -really- decide to continue this fic? So far it's shaping up to be one of my favorites. I have a weakness for highschool AU's (can we say Spiral Falling?) and well written ones (like yours) are hard to find. I do hope you decide to continue it.
_Amanda
PS: I am much of a lurker, but decided to contribute to the cause of good Naruto fanfiction and review (I'm also lazy). I hope you get your inspiration back!
_Amanda
PS: I am much of a lurker, but decided to contribute to the cause of good Naruto fanfiction and review (I'm also lazy). I hope you get your inspiration back!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! I like how you've portrayed Sasuke, and Naruto is just adorable!
Keep up the fantastic work!
=^_^=
Keep up the fantastic work!
=^_^=
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! You updated! Now I'm happy... I love this fic sooo much!! Sorry. My brain isn't working today, so if I sound stupid, I'm sorry... Anyway, It's awesome!! You're a really good writer. Awesome chapter!! Update soon pwease?? I love it!!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am sooooo glad you updated i hope you up date soon again
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another wonderful chapter! Awww, I do hope you don't give up on this story... even though you're writing it for fun, it's just so... wonderful! I -loved- the making out part... I think this is one of the things we've all been waiting for! I hope to see where it goes from here, and how Itachi comes into the equation. Not to mention Sakura and Kakashi as well. Though I do get the feeling that Kakashi might have known what would happen... heh.