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by KeairaxSeiaa

person kagome 5778
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm getting mad that you ain't writing faster hurry up and write chappie 5 wahhhhh
person harryhollow
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!! If you can will you please e-mail me I don't wait to miss out on your next chapter!! Heeheehee...poor naruto he can't keep fighting himself about liking boys heeheeheehee.....
person ky0kichi
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rofl. This was a nifty chapter. Iruka, panicking for NO reason and letting Naruto practically know that he was in a relationship with Kakashi, eh?! Rofl. It's about time you updated too! I was kind of afraid Sasuke would pull one of those "I don't know what you're talking about" Things and leave Naruto hangin'. I really like fics that have Sasuke actually being the one that makes the first move, ya know? Or maybe that's just me..?

Blah, anyway! This was a great chapter, no worries! Update sooner or later! Sooner preferably. ;)
person XD
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far! I can't wait to see what happens ^^
person Angel
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this chapter...keep up the good work...
person inuyashalove
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey.
I just read your first 4 chapters, and I love it. I like the way that you have the characters acting...especially Naruto. I don't know what it is, but I like his attitude, actions, and reactions. Sasuke is cool too. I can't wait to read more.
person Ry
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*o*! This ficcu...is just so awesome! I just kept laughing...out loud...which I don't usually do when I'm reading even if I'm amused! And...the description is just so different than most...and I love it! *worships you...kinda...* ^^ <3<3<3<3 Update?
person Aquastorm
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you. I really do. You story rocks.

And do you mind if I ask you a rather personal question? What exactly happened on YOUR first kiss?
And I was suprised when I read that your Birthday is on Oct 13, since mine's on the 11th. Heh.

I know if you don't want to answer the question above, but can I um..be your friend or something?
person The Dark Child [Am a girl
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I totally like it.
you gotta update
It's getting good poor fan girls when they find at out [NOTI HATE FAN GIRLS AND GUYS]
and is Iruk readlly gay WOW

THANKS
person Reyn
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo! This fic is interesting. I like the way you jumbled Naruto's thoughts together last chapter with the kiss. The one part that had me laughing out loud was in the first chapter when Sasuke entered the room and Naruto jumped up and yelled "STALKER!!". A close second was when Naruto went to talk to the teacher and his response was "LIES!!!"

But yeah, keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what happens next!