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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
=[ UPDAAATTEE. i'll send you pocky and porn. great combo. siiike.
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. It is my faveorite on this whole site. I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is addicting.
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... if Naruto starts to annoy Sasuke... and Sasuke has urges to hurt Naruto... that can't go right can it? was Itachi even telling the truth (since he's probably jealous and all)? can't wait to find out, so please continue soon!
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww poor naruto! T_T but i kinda wanna see the two get in a fist fight that may lead to some ... rough loving XD;;
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
I had deffinetly fogotten about this fic x_x
Such a long and painful hiatus.
This chapter was okay, if not filler-esque~
But I can filled the plot building and hopefully you update faster ^^
I really like this fic, because of its originality and capabilty to stay on-character throughout the fic.
So, like I said, hopefully you'll begin to update faster!
I had deffinetly fogotten about this fic x_x
Such a long and painful hiatus.
This chapter was okay, if not filler-esque~
But I can filled the plot building and hopefully you update faster ^^
I really like this fic, because of its originality and capabilty to stay on-character throughout the fic.
So, like I said, hopefully you'll begin to update faster!
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAT! That chapter was incredibly short! SHORT! I'm getting intolerant! Hurry up with the next chapter you bumb and make it longer!! I don't wait weeks for an update just to get five minutes of story!
Man Sasuke is gonna be a real stubborn asshole about this aint he? I hope Naruto can manage to beat some sense into him.
HURRY THE HELL UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't emphasise that enough man!!
Man Sasuke is gonna be a real stubborn asshole about this aint he? I hope Naruto can manage to beat some sense into him.
HURRY THE HELL UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't emphasise that enough man!!
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank god for your resolvement to not use japanese terms. people always get it wrong, and its the most irritating thing in the world. especially when it's english fanfiction for god's sake x__x anyway, cute story. unique quirky writing style.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Please keep writing! I just discovered the story--I really like it! The class project, community service thing was briliant to recreate team 7. I love your Shikamaru. Naruto's dad in jail is very clever, but poor Yondi! I really like the way you do the kiss scenes. It's pretty hot and nobody's had an orgasm yet!
I can't wait to see Naruto annoying Sasuke--sounds fun. It might be fun to have a Hinata take the chance to ask Naruto out now that she has "no chance" with him--but two stalkers might be too much for your story.
I can't wait to see Naruto annoying Sasuke--sounds fun. It might be fun to have a Hinata take the chance to ask Naruto out now that she has "no chance" with him--but two stalkers might be too much for your story.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how glad I am that you haven't dropped this story! I had lost all hope a while ago but I just happened to look in today and seeing the new chapter totaly lifted my spirits! Poor Naruto, it seems he just can't catch a break, I wish there'd be at least one smutty-but otherwise pointless chapter when they could actually enjoy being with one another but I haven't decided weather that's because I want them happy or because I want to read smut >__> either way, it's too late for that now. I can't wait to read the next chapter, however long it takes for you to write it. Glad to hear your GPA is up, I'm having a rough time with that myself right now but there's always time for SasuNaru. I had something else I wanted to say but I have forgotten it since I started writing. I'll have remembered by the time the next chapter is up ^^
PS: LOLirony that Naruto's father is now the one who's smothered in orange XD Nice touch.
PS: LOLirony that Naruto's father is now the one who's smothered in orange XD Nice touch.
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't leave reviews, but not only do I want an update, but I think I should tell you how awesome your fic is! Now, I just read every chapter in one sitting and I remember you saying early on how unoriginal you thought your fic would be. Well, erase that thought immediately (if you haven't already). It is VERY original (I've read a lot of fanfiction so I should know) and your writing style really does set it apart. Not only do I like Naruto's thoughts at the beginning, but you've been able to keep everyone in character throughout the entire story (very unlike one fic i just read >_<).
Anyway, one question kept entering my mind throughout...when did Sasuke first become interested in Naruto? I know you mentioned that they had similar pasts...but how could Sasuke have known that in the first place? Just curious! ^_^
So, now I've written my longest review EVER. Far be it for my single review to inspire you to update soon, but I thought I'd give it a chance. Keep up the GREAT work!
Anyway, one question kept entering my mind throughout...when did Sasuke first become interested in Naruto? I know you mentioned that they had similar pasts...but how could Sasuke have known that in the first place? Just curious! ^_^
So, now I've written my longest review EVER. Far be it for my single review to inspire you to update soon, but I thought I'd give it a chance. Keep up the GREAT work!