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by KeairaxSeiaa

person Crimson_Revenge
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... I really like this fic! It's awesome and written REALLY well!! I LOVE it! I hope you update soon! I don't think that I can go on without it anymore! I love you!! PLEASE update!!
person nicole
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is my my #1 story of the week plz update
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I loved this story. It is extremly entertaining, The part with Iraku was just plan funny. I love how you portray Sasuke. I really want you to update as soon as possible. I wish you all the best of luck and hope to see more soon.
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned yet how much I love the way you've made Naruto? Yes? Let me say it again- I simply love, love, LOVE Naruto in this story. He's just so... gah, I don't have the words for it. As for Sasuke, well, we kind of got a tiny peek into his mind right? It's better then nothing!

I love the little excerpt things you have at the beginning... they're just so... funny! It isn't by any chance part of the report that Naruto has to write for the project, is it? By the way, have you thought of posting this story on LiveJournal, especially on the SasuNaru community? I'm sure they would welcome you with open arms and lots of SasuNaru love! =D

I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings... perhaps more kisses?
person Sukara
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMIGAWD!!! Shikamaruy is physic!!! xD I hope Sasuke becomes naughty and possessive soon if he does in this fic. >=) Showing his affection to Naruto is school would work nicely too. xD Loved the update, even though it was small. =3
person Kativa-chan
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm a freshman as well, so I know just how you feel!! I lovethis story. I dunno why, but there's something...different about it. Do you post on fanfiction.net as well?
person Hagane No Tenshi
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG you must continue I'M LOVING THIS STORY !!!!!!!
person charappoko
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeeeee!! I -love- your story!! >_< Please update soon!
Okay!! bai bai!
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! That little scene was hott. Poor Naruto, so confused. Keep up the great work and please update soon.

-Black
person yurathewicked
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think you did a great job with the kissing scene. it was very realistic, the way naruto's thoughts ran together, and it made me get all wrapped up in what was happening. please keep up the good work~