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by KeairaxSeiaa

schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tee hee hee hot and sweaty Naruto, how can Sasuke resist that?! If Kakashi would've gave them 20 minuets he could have jumped him XD nice kissing action! it even made Sasuke hard!!! do him!!! ^o^/
person dark mousy
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay for update. hope you have time to update again soon. and with some of sasuke's thoughts on things. well, i'm curious about what's going on in that head of his. ^_^
person chi no hana
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. sasuke's a perv. he should be making more moves on na-chan! yey, go go !!!!
person Sasuke Fangirl #343
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. I've never read such a wonderfully written kiss scene before. So...emotionally detailed. A perfect balance of emotion and action. God, it was beautiful. Best part of the chapter I have to say ((after the begining, of course, now that was just -classic-)).

"...not in all the ways Sasuke was hard right now..."

xD That made me giggle really bad. It was such an innocent statement with SO many different interpretations that it was just -perfection- at it's best. That part about Sasuke leaving really surprised me...I never expected that to happen and I was pleased, actually. That was a rather pleasant turn, adding more suspense ((and tension. yum.)). All in all, another wonderful chapter!

[[I post under "GravityAddicted" but I've been in a slump lately so D':...yah. You think I'm a nice reviewer? Wow. Usually people say I'm harsh...Thanks! :D :::ego. thy name is Bob::: But, really, I'm being nice because there's nothing bad for me to say. :::shrugs::: ]]
person sasunaru fan!!!
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
go horny-stalker Sasuke!!! :D i shall always support your quests to make Naruto-chan yours!!! XD hehehe, love the fic, looking forward to see more of Sasuke's *cough* molestation *cough*!!!

i think it's a well-written fic and you must continue it!!! :D

SasuNaru rules!!!! ^____^
person Sukara
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-Gropes fic more- >:] Kakaka, great chapter! ^o^ Now, where did Sasuke disappear off to? xD
person silverfox
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovely chapter keep up the great work poor naruto he's so cofused update soon
person Crimson_Revenge
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story... You write really well. I hope you update the next chapter soon!! I like this so far... Please continue.
person Sora Jr
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol Well I hope you find a way to have those babies. Poor Naruto all confused...anyway I am glad you made Sakura normal most Yaoi stories make her a total bitch. I mean I don't like her that much but I got respect for her and she's really not mean. HAve fun in college and Update as soon as you can and sorry about your computer it happen to the best of us.
-see ya
person Mila
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! The kiss scene was jsut... just... *drooling* , ah you know... =)
Nice chap! Can't wait for the next one! see ya! ;)