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by KeairaxSeiaa

person ky0kichi
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hyahaha. Wtf? Sakura in a short skirt?! Noooo..

Sasuke in a short skirt on the other hand...That's hot. i'm not usually into crossdressing, but Sasuke...In a revealing girls outfit..Would be nice o___o;

Update soonnn
person Sukara
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-Gropes fic- <_<;;
person insert_fetchy_name_here
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...I'm loving it alright... *stares at screen* OMG MORE CREEPY MOLESTER-SASUKE!!!!!! *snicker* *lmao* seriously, i can just see naruto's face getting all weird and sasuke just standing there with cool expression as if nothing happened. xD lmao

It doesn't matter that it was short as long as you update :) lol, loved the part when naruto 'thinks real HARD'and then 'I'd LOVE to ride with you, sasuke' *eyelash-battering* lol xD Somehow i like the new touchy-feely sasuke that ur presenting... I mean ur keeping him in character and at the same time he's SO OOC! man, how do you do it? lol, please update soon *big eyes a'la puss in boots from shrek* xD if you haven't seen that movie, go watch it... wait how did i get that off-track? Oo; anyway, update soooooooooooon!!!! *glomp*
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... Love it.
person Demon
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great i can't wait for the next chapter
person silverfox
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesing chapter keep up the great work and update soon
person Diayma
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic so far, and if you're still lacking a beta, I wouldn't mind. Can't wait for your next update!
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww, poor naruto, having to be hated for a reason like that...well at least Sasuke can "confort" him lol. anyway, I'm happy that you send Saskura home early! tee hee hee beware Naruto of teh horny Sasuke lol I can't until nect chapter!! ^__^
person hogo-chan
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! I love this fic! Your writing is so witty! It's awesome! The characters are so hilarious too! I cant wait for the next chapter! ^_^
person WynterMajik
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far. It seems like it'll definatly turn out to be a wonderful story that I can definatly get used to. Please update when you can, but don't rush yourself cause all that usually does is make the chapter seem as rushed as you were to get it out. I will patiently be awaiting the next chapter, and good luck with writting it. :)