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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter... what I especially love is how you keep everyone's emotions and charactertistics in check, cause alot of people who write SasuNaru-ness don't x.X
Anyway, I'm loving this story more and more, so update soon! ^^
Anyway, I'm loving this story more and more, so update soon! ^^
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I think you have a great beginning to the story! That part where you wrote it in Naruto's POV was just..wonderful! *nod*nod*
If you're looking for a beta, feel free to drop by beta's guild (http://www.livejournal.com/community/betas_guild/).
I look forward to the next chapter!
kayoko
I think you have a great beginning to the story! That part where you wrote it in Naruto's POV was just..wonderful! *nod*nod*
If you're looking for a beta, feel free to drop by beta's guild (http://www.livejournal.com/community/betas_guild/).
I look forward to the next chapter!
kayoko
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great and I am a kingdom hearts fan and I am glad tooo hear your a Shikamaru fan. Hes basicly and Idol to all lazy people who watch Naruto.
(That means me too, I would write a story but I am to lazy.) Goodluck moving into your dorm room!
-see ya
(That means me too, I would write a story but I am to lazy.) Goodluck moving into your dorm room!
-see ya
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I recognise me from your other fic now too.So......I really liked that one and I am sorry if I stroked you the wrong way with my reveiw,jesus its my week for that,its gotta be me so I am gonna play safe with a mellow and sincere thank you.Thank you for the update.
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I never do long review. I never know what to say, I review a story when I like it and I like yours.
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH!!! I LOVE IT!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! I beg you UPDATE!!! I want to read every chapter until its finished!!!! I JUST LOVE IT!!!!!!! Sasuke! come on go get Naruto!!! I CAN"T WAIT!!! As of today this FANFIC is one of my Favorite Naruto fic!!! I"M SO EXCIETED ^_^!!!!
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
There aren't too many stories right now that make me laugh like yours does! Naruto is so wonderfully "alive"!
He appears natural and still in character, very well done! ^_^x Also, the way you explained the behaviour of everyone without the Kyuubi stuff is really good.
Well, I hope for some lemony goodness in one of the future chapters!
~Horizont
There aren't too many stories right now that make me laugh like yours does! Naruto is so wonderfully "alive"!
He appears natural and still in character, very well done! ^_^x Also, the way you explained the behaviour of everyone without the Kyuubi stuff is really good.
Well, I hope for some lemony goodness in one of the future chapters!
~Horizont
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol. Yes, you spelled my name right, and yes, I really enjoyed the update. ^^ Still very clever and well written, as was to be expected. Oh, and I'm glad you've decided to keep the title of the fic as it is for now... I'll still try to think of a suggestion if you really want to change it, but honestly, I like it the way it is. ^^ I can't wait for the next (part of the?) chapter. (lol) Keep up the good work!!!
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm glad you didn't wait a month to update! Congratulations on getting almost thirty reviews for the first chapter! =P
A very interesting chapter, Sasuke gets more and more interesting...as does Naruto. His character keeps making me laugh, especially that part where he asks for the "scotch on rocks". I think it was the imagery that made me smile. I can't wait to see the next chapter, and good luck with the move!
A very interesting chapter, Sasuke gets more and more interesting...as does Naruto. His character keeps making me laugh, especially that part where he asks for the "scotch on rocks". I think it was the imagery that made me smile. I can't wait to see the next chapter, and good luck with the move!
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! You added tension! That's an extremely wonderful thing to add to fics like yours (I don't mean the plot, but the narration. :heart: beautiful). It makes it seem more...real, or something. Gah, I don't know what I'm saying. Pay me no mind. :'D But anyway, I love the way you narrate! It so refreshingly original! :hearts everywhere:
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[[Glad you like mah name. :D I have an account here, but I'm not on except when posting so...yeah. It's an alias.]]