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by KeairaxSeiaa

person Shingo the Pest
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how Naruto's dad isn't dead. And the mystery of his crimes. @o@ I also love how Sakura's playing a part in the story. It's hard being a Sakura fan who like SasuNaru. Or a SasuNaru fan who like Sakura. Whatever.
person Fan
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please e-mail me when you have updated? I love your story, and would like to continue reading it.
JakotsuHajime2@aol.com
or
TsuzukiMuraki@aol.com
person insert_fetchy_name_here
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...hmmm *thinks* it could be that Naruto's parents were accused of some crime that they didn't commit and then were executed. And then nobody believes that they didn't commit the crime and they just think that Naruto is a hopeless criminal child with dead criminal parents and they all hate him. And then the parents are afraid that naruto would influence their children badly so they have forbidden their children to make friends with naruto. Something like that. Very good story!!! I really hope you update soon!!!!
person Gold Silk
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far! I love AU highschool fics.
As for Naruto's past, I'm guessing that his parents died when he was young, he was put in an orphange, and then was adopted by Iruka (who's probably his elementary school teacher.) As for why everyone hates him, Maybe he got caught in some crossfire with a criminal named Kyuubi *shurgs* The ideas are endless :D
person gallatica
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude.
update.
please.
person evil
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oo! *Spins around and grins* Does Sasuke actually like Naruto-chan!? Is he actually gay... Welp, all signs put to positive on the gay and straight scale... Bwuahahah! *Dances around like an idiot* Can't wait for the next chapter too!
person silverfox
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was an interesting chapter keep up the good work can't wait for the next one so update soon
person blisblop
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay.Your motivation is not glowing with hellfire is it?More like a bic lighter but wtf you can burn down or blow up a building with a bic so lets try to ignore that issue.What! What! okay so Narutos parents are/where celebrities of some sort to the place they live then his mom dies giving birth 2 weeks later his dad dies in a car accident because he ws so distraught.Then a nurse who looked after the child was found dead of some thing that makes you bleed a bit before yu die,a foster home he was in burned killing the whole family.Freak happenings but every time the bodies are found(from him still connected to his mom he is always found totally unharmed with someone elses blood on his face.Abysmal anti serendipity thing.Hows that,for a start anyway.All high profile up to that kid who bullied him in grade three who was found beside a blood smeared Naruto quite dead from an assult so he gets this rep.I hope you continue.Yo.
person Sasuke Fangirl #343
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It always amazes me how the overall idea of a story can be the same, but the writing style can make it ultimately different. I mean, they're in High School and they're supposed to fall in love, right? How many different ways can it happen? XD Shockingly-- many, many different ways. And YOUR way, seems extremely appealing. As for Naruto's past...um. His parents could be like...serial killers or something of that category. Thieves or...dangerous people that nobody likes. I don't know...

Ps: The title makes me think someone is stalking someone else. *coughSASUKEcough* (Sasuke: I'm not doing anything! ::stops following Naruto::)

Looking forward to more! :D
person Horizont
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This starts out to be interesting! And never mind if it's a cliche with high school and stuff, I love it! ^_^x
*cuddles Sasuke*