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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
His parents had some sordid love affair? Then left the baby behind... Yeah I'm cruel...
I don't suppose that will help, ^^" but oh well!
Just wanted to say I rather enjoyed it! As always Sasuke is uner cool!
Hope new one comes out soon...ish. "crosses fingers"
Balafeo!
I don't suppose that will help, ^^" but oh well!
Just wanted to say I rather enjoyed it! As always Sasuke is uner cool!
Hope new one comes out soon...ish. "crosses fingers"
Balafeo!
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I find this story oddly addicting, and I do hope you don't wait a month to update! Since Naruto's an orphan, perhaps his past has to do with something his parents had done, and now he's paying the price? I'm excited to see where you go with this story, especially how Sasuke and Naruto get together... =D
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, I so wanna see how this goes you have to update soon.
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you wrote your fanfic so far. You keep it well organised and to the point. The title is not that bad; it points out the main conflict in the idea, Sasuke 'watching' Naruto. As for Naruto's past...I don't have any ideas at the moment, but I'm sure you can come up with something good.
Maelik
Maelik
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, this will be interesting.
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice start. Sasuke's stalker attitude was definitely amusing, hehehe. I would love to read more. Hopefully you get inspired soon ^^
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaah I wish I had an idea to help you update faster but unfortuneately I don't. ^^* Anyways, I hope you'll update soon because I'm dieing to read what will happen next.
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far! Please please PLEASE! update!!!!
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome first chatper! update soon!
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh, this is interesting. your fic grabbed my attention in a good way and held it. and it feels like a cliffhanger where this chapter ended. please update soon. XD i look forward to reading more.