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by KeairaxSeiaa

person Tatemshope
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very good! I like it alot! You should definately update soon! Hmmm... ideas. I think his parents should have been convicted of a crime that Naruto doesn't believe they committed, and then they were executed. That would explain why no one wants to be his friend!
person cenotin
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how this story's going, and Naruto's POV at the begining of the story really amuses me...not straight when Sasuke's around, huh?
I'll be waiting for you to update, thanks.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I love the title......... Oh, wait, that wasn't what I was going to say first. Sorry. ^^ This is a very interesting idea, and the first chapter was excellently done. Unfortunately, my family now thinks that I'm insane due to the fact that I appeared to laugh at random times while I was reading this, but still......... ^^ I look forward to finding out "what the deal is" with Naruto, as well as why Sasuke seems so interested in the dobe. So keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? ^___^ Until then!
person blisblop
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Agressive sasuke,i love that.Pissy Itachi,too bad,he is so hot.Sakura sure is shallow if she thinks you know somebody by parents and birthday.This is real good.Please don't make us wait so long.Thank you.
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!! this story is really good!! I love the storyline and I love how sasuke is "stalking" Naruto, I sure hope Sakura goes home before Naruto!! ^o^
person kitsunke
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is great.
I would like to read next part of this ff, soon.

Hmm ... you didn't metion how old are they ...

And something about Naruto past: *meybe* he was found in forest and nobody knew were his parents were and who they were.


Sorry for my english, but I'm from poland and i'm not the best at grammar ^^
person Sora Jr
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well I hope you get inspired soon because this is a cool story. Maybe Naruto's parents could be murdered in a giant town fire and his mother died tring to save him from a building. That's just an idea. Please get inspired!!