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by KeairaxSeiaa

person Adi
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you updated!
i cant tell you how awesome that is!
and the chapter was really good!
"annoy her till she gives in"
yondy always was an uber genius XD
love your work and im so happy you're carrying on

XXX
person riddle_me_yellow
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, amazing fic you have going. Dont worry about the clicheness of the fic, the vast majority of great authors have written a fic that is completly cliche as well. Its almost like coming of age, but for fanfiction! (but you have probably heard all that already) XD have fun writting and please update soon. AH! I cant wait till sasuke confronts Naruto about his father. Personaly, im hoping for tons of DRAMA!
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im willing to poke you if it would help at all, im good at poking! ^_^ i feel weird about naruto's dad killing sasuke's family, i feel like itachi's in the other room laughing, kicking the bodies under the rug or something. anywaysi hope your muses return to you promptly, but i know how it is when fic dies in your head there isnt much you can do but suck it up and write crap or let it die. (though please dont let it die -_-)
person Keina
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! New chap. :D
update soon, I really like Naruto's father although he has only been in half a chapter :P
person lo
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that you are trying to write a real story, nice job.
person Jen
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do love this story, and... while the chapters could be longer, I don't necessarily mind because I've seen shorter. And the novels some people like to post aren't great either. LOL. Anyway... I hope Sasuke can find it in his heart to see Naruto again because really... Naruto didn't kill his parents... and maybe his father had a reason for killing the Uchihas?... mebbe? Anyway. Keep it going. Or give me joor friend's email addy so I can poke her to poke you into writing more xDDDD. PEACE!
person Emrilou
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Im so glad your gunna keep going with this...i was mortally unsatisfied where it was left...ill be looking for your update!
person Nekoneko
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww... that's too bad.... this stories soooooo great! I hope you find inspiration and update soon cuz this story is awesome and I love the limeade! ;)
person SharinganGirl
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I like the fact that Naruto just flat out refuses to admit that he's gay, but he's not too hesistant around Sasuke. And I have to say, I adore the could-be Uchihacest moments. Itachi is kinda creepy, but in a good, Uchihacesty way. Please try to keep at it; you have hundreds of people begging you to continue, and they're behind you all the way.
person blisblop
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow .Those notes are like a strange epic-in-a-fic that'cha get as a special extra.OK, cool.
I hadn't seen this fic in soooo long. Not bad, not bad a all. Itachi is ever so neato here, drifting around like the voice of Doom