AFF Fiction Portal
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow it's a nice story with a twist
u should write the next book!
person Church
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice upadte in awhile and i cant wait for the next one!
person chocmilkchan
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lemon, good. i really enjoyed how you made it so educational. it seemed a lot more personal between Kakashi and Rikako. keep going; i love this fic!
person Bella07
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is AWSOME!!!!!! omg!! you so have to continue this! this is like the only actual romantic story i have ever read of Kakashi falling in love with someone! I LOVE IT! LOVE IT!!! :D:D:D:D:D

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN!!!!
person Church
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHERES THE NEAR DEATH OF KAKASHI GODAMNIT!!! ><
person Church
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG THIS STORY IS GETTN EVEN BTTR DA FRIGGN PLOT AND SHIT WOOT btw u shuld put a disclaimer or seomthng dont want ur story to get deleted now
person Church
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn you write fast and i do like updates!!!!! this is a very uh intellectual fic ugh i thnk i spelled it wrong your very inteligent :) btw i cant wait to see whats gonna happen with Rikako and stuff and her weird chakra thngy some mental problems i thnks
person Muse
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im wondering if you are gonna make a sequel i mean it would be good
person Doom Train
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
shame not many review this fic and its so good too
person Feel Good Inc.
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue i like this alot :)