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person Church
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I AM BLOWN AWAY BY THIS STORY WOOT oh my god this is so smart i mean the story ideas everything just like when Kenji wanted to do that logic problem i couldnt figure it out genius but what are the answers? and of how you thought the battle between rikako and the cloud nin impressive and smart lighting wit hthe water and then with the spear pole nice job he got PWNED like a N00b and she can do much more seems some hinting of her doing more much more i know and many unexpeceting things always happen alot anyways good job
person Blood eyes
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
like this fic ima keep checking
person Minamo beast
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY *bows alot* it took me all day to read all 4 chaps and im still not satisfied MAKE MORE PLZ!!!!
person Ginseng
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>< omg Kakashi-kun!!!!!!! i love kakashi :P
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
luv it make more
person hygh on ryce
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ill be checking for more chappies this is a sweet fic
person Varsnatch
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THERE MUST BE MORE WOOT!!!!!!!!!
person shameful_desire
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGD.................poor Kakashi....sob. You are so evil, now she's toying with him ..."sigh"...are you going to do a sequel to this one??
person allyluv
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! it's really good! and let me guess. the kunoichi is supposed to KILL poor hatake isn't it?

will you be continuing this? please say yes! i can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.