rate_review Reviews

I couldnt read all of this, i did read the half about the blowjob, you know thing. Its not the best fic ive read and its a little OOC, you know for INO and Chouji really. They are both virgins so dont you think they are moving a little too fast in the love scene? I figured he would ask her to spend the night and then they would slowly work up the nerve, you know in a realistic way, not just start going at it and sucking him off. I mean wouldnt that be embarrassing for first timers? O.o anyways besides the lack of a romantic mood here, and the miss spelling it was an OK story and i mean that in the nicest way possible.

I actually really love this pairing. Not enough people acknowledge it, and even fewer seem to write it, but kudos to you for doing both!!! In fact, this is one of only three Het pairings I like in Naruto so far. A sequel could definitely be in order for this story.... LOVE YOU!!!!

This was quite nice, although maybe a little too quick.

Aaww! ChoujixIno makes me happy, and you never see it! This was very nice.

geron you are the savior of AFF. *runs off crying*

Woah! Not many Chouji fics out there, but the few that do exist aren't too bad. Although the Shikmaru-Chouji-Ino team is certainly not my favorite this is a great fic. Please make another chapter!

nice pairing and nice plot. squirrels