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boys are stupid. -_- they can't see past masks. grrr...some one older and wiser needs to catch them at it or something and see through the mask that naruto has on. >.< if it wasn't for that damned thing him and sasuke wouldn't be so lonely and depressed! >.< STUPID STUPID BOYS! (lovely story though. xD im just ranting about the idiocy the boys are having...although i'm sure this relationship is more possible than most sasu/naru/sasu fics.)

uhm! that was preety sad story.i guess your kindas depressed to write that kind of fic.but, in my own opinion.that was AWESOME.nice story you write here,but it was written with so much angst that my sister did CRY A LOT FOR YOUR FIC.i guess you should write it as a happy ending,that's my sister's own opinion, but for me hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...........i want the fic to stay longer & you have to give it some twist ,like whoa,oh come on,uhm M PREG SOMETHING heh,just my little dirty imagination.heh! sorry.but i guess i really should congratulate you for a job well done.

aww! this is cute. i love it! i usually love my uke's screaming in pain, but i definatly like this one. on my faves list!

Oh wow, I love this! It's so sad...they need to figure it out...please? Have one of them get up the courage to confess m'kay?

Wow... So sad and depressed... So yeah... I'm e-mailing you I want to know the 'happy ending' something is bound to happen that ends this staleness of their lives... Because like Murphy's Law states that anything bad that can happen will happen...

And we know Naruto or Sasuke will break once something happens that threatens the one they love...eveything will be thrown away for them. The payments started because Sasuke covers Naruto....But what if he wasn't there what will happen?

I love this bittersweet story, thank you for writing it, coolsa.

It's interesting to see how they dance around each other emotionally, yet they can't seem to keep apart. The characters were very well written and my favourite part was where Naruto smiled despite everything. I wonder if things would be different if Sasuke saw that smile, ne?
I would have begged you to continue and "let them live happily ever after" (I'm a sucker for romance :P), this fic just have so much potential to get even more angsty or a bit more sweeter. But since you said no *cries*, we'll just have to use our imagination on this...

URGH!!! Must finish! Hi it's me!!! Reading all your fics now... No! They must find out! LoL, I just don't like when they end like that. ^-^ Keep up the good work!

~Akira~

really really good!! i wish you were continuing it, but stopping there gives us room to imagine i guess. the story was bittersweet, i perfect angsty fanfic?

i want a happy ending!!!
fantastically written fanfic!!!
poor NAruto and Sasuke!!!

>_______<

okay, they both have mutual understanding, but they were also ignorant about that. I think that Naruto should have expressed more confusion as to why Sasuke refused to let him go... hmm... I liked the first chapter, the emotions were more surfaced in that chapter than in this one, but it was nevertheless, good. I'm looking forward on how you would manipulate the storyline into a whole and organized plot. I don't review that often, I just read, but I seem to want to review this... oh well, I'll keep waiting for the next part... and even if you don't see my comments on your review page, always remember that I'm reading this... but i'll try to review as often as my body feels like it wants to leave a review... =)