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Not a bad conclusion. To go from your first chapter to something lovey-dovey and sweet would not work well, I think. I don't think every story needs a happy ending. Readers need a little twist-in-the-gut of pain occasionally!
I enjoyed it :)

Sweet! It's so cold and demented. I love their inner voices. Some of the spelling could use some help though... Write more ^o^!

Your story was so good I really wish you would wright more of it.
I can't tell you just how great that story made me feel or how much I want you to continue.
I hav'nt read a good sad story like that in so long.
Really wish you'd do more of it.
lov ya!
-Billy

plz plz plz write moooore. very nice, lets see more lemons!!

Wow, lovely fic. I wouldnt mind a sequal, but i dont think it ended too terribly either. great work.

Squel! Sequel! Sequel!

I really enjoyed this. You have no idea how long I've been looking for a story like this, and it was almost as if you were reading my mind.

Great job, loved it. And Trapt is a wondreful band!

i love ur story! angst... is great!

update soon, please? luv u! xD

this is totally my kink! I can so see Naruto letting Sasuke have sex out of guilt/love (but not romantic love, like 1st-best friend brotherly love). Of course, the other way to read this is that Naruto also has romantic feelings, but because Sasuke's so cold, he thinks he's just being used for sex--with sex just another way for them to fight and be rivals. I loved how you had Sasuke be cold here outwardly though. I almost want 2 sequels--one where Naruto feels romantic love towards Sasuke and one where it's just guilt and friendship-love. I liked that both possibilities were open in this fic.

I only had 1 problem--I don't see Sasuke getting regularly injured for Naruto as very believable. Naruto gets pretty strong pretty quick (yeah there's the Haku fight, but only a little while later there's the Gaara fight where he was saving Sasuke), and Sasuke isn't such a bad ninja he'd get injured lots, even if protecting Naruto. Plus if it was regular, Naruto would also have more anger--like Sasuke didn't respect him enough as a ninja that he could take care of himself.

Anyway, very nice. Here's hoping you get no more writers block!

the second chapter was just as amazing as the first! but could you please write one more and give them a happy ending? sorry to ask if you're not up to it, but I think it would be really sweet to make one more chapter where they confess their love and have make *takes a deep breath* super-duper-hot-kinky-totally-passionate LOVE! w00t! ^_^ yeah, that would rock hardcore.

I think it was be cool to see what Naruto is thinking about , like write what just happen for Naruto view piont, or go make to the fisrt time Sasuke made Naruto have sex with him. and do Sasuke make Naruto have sex more then one time per time Sasuke asve his live. Like Siince Sasuke was so badly hurt saving Naruto life with he make Naruto have sex more then once , becouse I think since he was hurt so bad he sould wing it for actless 3 more fucks.