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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's great. *speechless* They way Naruto smiled when Sasuke advanced on him but was still so sad. It was almost evil. I liked it a lot. Keep writing if you wish, but it would be so eternal if it stopped here. So mysterious, you know? But I want another chapter. *sticks tongue out* Thanks again!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, please add another chapter to this!! This could be a very good beginning to a longer fic!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* Absolutely beautiful. I found no mistakes and the wording the great. Great sex scene and great emotions. I really felt a stab at my heart when Sasuke felt it. I bet Naruto feels the same way as him but its just that he sees only the coldness from Sasuke that Sasuke can seem to put away. Please write another chapter to this. I would love it immensely. Great job. I vote! YES another chapter! Thank you!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that was totally depressing, but well written. Maybe a sequal where we find out Nar really loves Sas but thinks Sas just wants sex??? Please, I hate it when Nar doesn't want Sas, I hate a depressed Sas. Oh well, it is your story and I will read it regardless, because it is good.
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I vote yay. This story was well written, but you can't just leave it like that! Maybe you should stay away from angsty things for a while and read/watch some 'happy' things, and then continue. Yet again, great story!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally like song fics, but this was good. The song wasn't too intrusive.
It's interesting seeing Sasuke craving affection, but you still have him able to act cold, so he doesn't seem OOC.
I almost feel sorry for Naruto. On the other hand... he's getting fucked by Sasuke. Lucky bastard!
It's interesting seeing Sasuke craving affection, but you still have him able to act cold, so he doesn't seem OOC.
I almost feel sorry for Naruto. On the other hand... he's getting fucked by Sasuke. Lucky bastard!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nay!!! I wish there was more of a, Naruto would come around, or a, Sasuke would get over her damn ego, and live happily ever after. I sort of breaks my heart and you definately were watching too many depressing movies. Go see Howl's Moving Castle and then come back to write a story about Naruto. Okay... Okay... Laterz then. ~.-
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm a HUGE Sasu/Naru fan but I def. liked this story, because seriously, I'm not sure Naruto's gay (even though I love pretending) but I'm almost positive Sasuke likes the boys. Ah well, good stuff. Thanks for posting!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked then ending. I think this could be the beginning to a good story, but then I'm an angst-monkey.
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that was just mean... leaving off like that! Poor Sasuke, poor Naruto! I don't suppose you'd consider doing a sequel of sorts, with the two, more... um, possibly a bit in love? XD
Nicely written though, and the smut was fun to read! (As long as one over-looked all the angst *sniffs*)
Nicely written though, and the smut was fun to read! (As long as one over-looked all the angst *sniffs*)