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for The longest journey

by valanthe

schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really hope that you'll be able to update this fic!! i love this fic...and i love this pairing! great job!
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kyaaahhh!!!! XD awesome fic!!! i love it, i love it, i love it!!! specially the part where the kizuna family thought they were a couple and urge the two to dance and before that, when shika was watching her dance ^_^ oooh i got goosebumps, i love that part! ...i really love this pairing and i think your are doing an excellent job in writing this fic, even without the lemons yet, i love it already.

please, pleeease update soon and end my torture V_V
person Temari20
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please write more it's very good.And it's Kunoichi.
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awsome. i totally loved reading that. update soon please! (^_^)
person blue
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic so much. im a shikatemari lover so i think this is totally awesome^^
please write more soon..oh and i think your story
layout is very original!! keep it up.
person Jayden
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like it, I can't wait for more! As I read I see some errors, but they're minor and generally the brain switches over before it's even taken in fully. I hope you update soon, real soon!
person QJD
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wheres da lemon man?? 4/5
person Lady_Quotes
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, and I'm very impressed that English is not your first language. You write as well as most of my friends and English is their only language. lol. Well, anyways. I'm really enjoying the story, so please continue.
Lq
person frizzy197
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*thumbs up* write more!!!
person ardenilia
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story. please keep writing. and, when you update, can you tell me, cause i don't wanna miss your story, not even a single word! ^-^


from a BIG ShikaTema fan,
ardenilia
ardenilia@yahoo.com

Ja!