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for Of Hearts and Dreams

by kaze

person blisblop
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet.Naruto fucked Itachi for years and is using him to get Sasuke or offered him amnesty or had him as a double agent.I choose A.Sasuke will hate him.......and rightly so.I am probably wrong but thats what I am picking up.Can't wait to see the fur fly.
person Leasan
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't find words to say how mych I enjoy and love your story!!
And Naruto is just uber-sexy here, OMG!! The whole chapter is simply AWESOME!
Every detail, conversation - I adore it!
Please, don't keep me waiting for the update!! PLEEEEASE!! I'm dying of curiousity!
person Adri
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!! It's soo cuute! Please update soon!!!
person shadedfaith
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
M'so glad you updated [does t3h happy dance XD;]
No critiques or nothing 'cause I'm not good with that stuff and it's really nice and I don't like giving crit and and and...

Duuude, good stuff XD;; [can't you tell I'm awfully tired?]

Anyway, I hope you update soon, and have a lovely day while your at it ^^!
person fib
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This deserves more reviews... I hope more people find/read/review so you are encouraged to keep writing this excellent fic. I can't wait to find out what's going on with poor Itachi!
person lo
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really nice. I like how the characters interact with each other. I think this is well written and well thought out. Keep up the good work.
person blisblop
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooohhhhh boy.What a set up.Itachi frothing at the mouth.Heh.This is good,very good.So many things could happen.Smart Naruto.Itachi seems doomed,like Naruto would let him kill him.A statium fight?It would be apt since they are being so greek tragidy about the whole thing.Heh.Fuuunney.What a good Naruto ,everyone IC,well except Itachi and hey,poor guys is probably in shock.This rocks.I hope Sasuke takes the time to try and talk to Itachi. I also hope ,well never mind I can't wait to see more of this.Stunning plot.Yum,many yums.
person blisblop
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya know it almost on second reading sounds like Itachi and Naruto where lovers,Itachi sounds betrayed.Weird.
person Ciel
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh.. the plot juz keeps on thickening. very very interesting. update soon!
person ochiba
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a beautiful story. (;_;) The interaction between a mature Naruto and a mature Sasuke that you depict in your fic is intriguing at sometimes and touching at others --and never boring! Thank you for sharing. Looking forward to your next chapter. Please continue to take your time, as your patience is obviously paying off. *^_^*