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by Trollmia

person kit master
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD yea!!! loved it MORE PLEASE
person naruke
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You complained about the lack of ideas, so maybe it is a sign to finish this story and begin another one.. DON'T THINK THAT WHEN I SAY THIS, IT MEANS THAT I DON'T LIKE YOUR STORY!!! 'CAUSE I LIKE IT VERY MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And for the rest of the story, you should just finish it with that that Naruto has they're baby and they name it and others get married or something like that..But tell uss what happened between Lee and Sasame!!! It's an odd pair, but I don't dislike it at all!!!
person jingko
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the latest chapter, are you going to do more with the others as well, (iruka/kakashi etc etc. )?
person Fan1
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I finally sat down and read your story. I can't believe I waited so long. It's great. I can't wait for Naruto to have the baby. LoL!!! I'm enjoying all of the relationships going on through the story. I especially like Naruto/Sasuke, of course, but definitely Iruka/Kakashi and Hinata/Gaara. Those are awesome. Hinata does seem like the type of girl that would catch Gaara's attention.

I'm not sure what happened, but this morning there was a part 25 and now it's not there. I saved part 25 earlier so when I could read it later in the day. Well, I just finished it and I must say, I didn't really like the baby-doll in the story. It didn't seem like your Naruto/Sasuke characters. Please don't put it in, but if you do, I'm sure I can deal with it. :(

Other than that, your story is great. Keep up the good work.

Cya,
Fan1
person arryelle
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well yes I did love it I jope theres a lemon between my fav Het couples soon and wheres tsunade and Shika I love that couple don't stop there love lol. Well update soon The quickie was great

lOVES arry
person Alucard
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Nice chap
person Itaika Ichimori
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PENIS!!! Now you type it!!! There are other words for the male organ. You use shaft to much. If you need a list I'd be more than happy to supply you with one, just say so in your next update. If you finished the story then I guess you can't though huh? -isn't done reading it yet- I'm not trying to be mean or anything but it greatly annoys me when someone uses the same word over and over, it makes me want to skip ahead to get away from the repetitiveness of it all and I might miss something vital. Its actually caused me to stop reading a story because of the automatic reaction my mind has when something bugs me. Again I'm not trying to be mean but this is a problem alot of people have.

-Ichimori
person jingko
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
happy dance over the last chapter!! love it, can't wait to see where it's going to, and yummie iruka/kakashi's.
person Anne
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I've just finish reading the whole story and I like it so much! Yeah, it's so good! Oh, I have one question: I think that in one of the chapters Kyuubi says Naruto is Yondaime's son. But, do the rest of the people (including Naruto) know about it? Maybe you've already said it, but as I've said I've read the whole story in a day and my brain is collapsed...
Oh, and if it's not too much trouble, I'd like you to kill Sakura! (sorry about that, Sakura's fans). I mean I think she deserves it! Although she is mad 'cause her family, she still is a bitch! Really, I hate her!
Well, apart from that, I repeat I love this story! Really! So go on, and update it soon! See you! ;)
person Arryelle
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes I love you so much another odd couple sasame and Lee very nice. Sakura bitch needs to stay locked up lol. And that lemon gave me delightful shivers it was great well I glad you updated and reassured me there isn't an ending in sight. If there was as you could see from my last review I'd freak out LoL well update when you can again.

Loves Arry