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for Below Zero

by Trollmia

person naruke
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHATA CHAPTER! AND I LOVE IT THAT YOU CAN'T BE ALL ANGSTY ALL THE TIME.. ME,MYSELF, AREN'T A ANGSTY-PERSON (sometimes,not allways..) SO KEEP IT UP! OH, AND THE NEW NAME FOR THIS FIC, MAYBE..UMM..ETTO..HMMMM.. I DON'T KNOW! BUT YOU DON'T HAVE TO CHANGE IT,IT'S FINE AT IT IS..
person Kokoromotonai
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee. Poor Kiba. His nose is so sensitive to smells. The most amusing thing about this chapter was Ino when she was having fun. I never thought she'd be that sadistic with her power. Chouji will have his hands full once they get together. I'm glad Naru-chan has so many people who care about him. The love he recieves from them he deserves. That love will protect him from Sasuke's shitty sibling. Update soon author-san. It makes me sad when you don't.
person kitsunekochan
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geeeeeez they're soo cute^^!For the action scene...yeah it's a bit confuse i'd say but I'm not a pro^^;But this story is generally very nice to read!^^*Arg I want to know what will happen!*
And for a new title...*although I like this one it reminds how the story started*no idea sorry^^;
Keep writing/Kaitetsuzukete ne!^^
person Kenz
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its gettign better and better ^.^
as for a title I guess I could say.....

Im Only Human and I Need To Be Loved

person Hime-sama
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore your story. I 'm mad about SasuNaru. Hahaha....cute pregnant Naru-chan ^ ^. But I don't like Shikamaru with Tsunade. She's way too old for him.
person Arryelle
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absoultly love it and your fighting scenes were great I loved the Ino killng scene very nice. And wow I know this is inapporiate but you and your hubby must be having awsome sex from all of your steamy blow-jobs and sex scenes damn good whooo lol

well update soon
Loves, Arry
person Jadejj
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The battle is just fine keep it up :D
person Shadowolf
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it I weas laughing so much i fell off my chair giggles and runs for the next chapter
person Ladyfox
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good I can't waite until the next chapter comes out. I find that your sumrey is miss leading and thats a good thing! I would have more than likly pass this story if you had put some thing different. I am sorry for my spelling, It's 12:27 in the mornig and I am usaly asleep by now but I wanted to know what happen in you story. I love it, to put it simply
person NARUKE
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAVE I EVER TOLD YOU HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS FIC?! BECAUSE IT'S VERY MUCH!
KEEP IT UP MAN!