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for Below Zero

by Trollmia

person Arryelle
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So happy you updated lol. The love ends to become foilage of death turmoil angst ahhhhh ok well I can handle it for a few chappies but after that no grantee's I get kinda teary around angst please no charater death I really would die and no read CD is just the worst. well written though

Loves Arry
person Yami Jay
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi better be alright... And let's hope that Itachi shows up infront of them and gets killed by Sasuke.
person D/H
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad and i will be looking forward to your fanfic..Looking forward to more Naruto and Sasuke,...I kinda basically skipped all that was in chapter 20 but read only N/S'z part..Hahahaha..The one thing i like most about this story is how kind and romantic PLUS protective Sasuke is toward Naruto and the unborn child..It's just sooo sweet and I look forward to reading more..Those two are just too cute..
person Ever Rin
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Muahahahahaha! Bring on the Gaara Hinata Goodness soon hehe =P
person Kokoromotomai
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go Shikamaru-kun! Great job gettin' the lady! Hee hee. But poor Iruka and Anko. Even worse, WHAT'S WRONG WITH KAKASHI-SENSEI-SAMA?! IS HE OKAY?! WAHHHHHHHHHHHH! I'm so disappointed that Neji and Temari were interrupted during their "special activites." But It was funny that Shikamaru burst in on them like that. I'm so worried about Kakashi-sensei-sama that I can barely worry about Sakura. The main concern now is him and Naruto's and Sasuke's baby. Will they be safe enough from the mist-nins? Update soon!
person Alucard
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chap i can't wait till you update again.
person Jane Silver
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is deffently one of the best naruto stories I have ever read. Plus the fact that it has two of my faverite pairing in it makes it better.
Which reminds me, I have an idea about a scene in a future chapter. I thought maybe you could do a scene were Kakashi is being held prisinor and he's thinking about Iruka and how they got together to help deal with the situation. I would really like to know exactly what happend between those two at the hot springs and how Kakashi fell in love with Iruka. I kind of feel that you just glazed over their relation develupmant while you go into great detail about the others. not to dis your writing or anything. It's just that your such a great writer I was looking forward to reading how you got those two together. Well anyway, it's just and idea. keep up the good work.
person bhodi li
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah for Naruto..even though it's a filler section, i do like how Sasuke is possessive of Naruto and i like the scene where Sasuke bursts out of his house when Tsunade and Temari are interrupting his "alone" time with Naruto..it was so cute. I always thought of Neiji as bisexual so it's cute either way. =)
person SasuNaru-Fan
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey thats a great fic you got there,cool pairings and stuff,and great idea on the child thingy hoping for a next chapter soon sayonara
person Masago
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update? ^.^; Hehehe. I like it...thanks for the updates~whee, looking forward to more. XD