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No! I hope Kakashi and Gai aren't really dead. I can care less about Ibiki(sorry if you like him) Awww, poor Iruka...I love this stroy ^.^

wow that so cool and man Itachi must know he going to be an Uncle then... eh

in chapter 20 u need to fix a few sentences where u use "are" instead of "is". like "The boy are strong but ....." it's the "the boy IS" or "the boys ARE". it just irritated me. and it happened another time before that

MORE MORE MORE

i must knw what happen to naruto and kakashi-sensi

dying from all the suspens please the next chapter before i die

thxx

Huaaaah!!!! This is one of my fav fanfics!!!! T-T (My fav pairing is ShikamaruTsunade!!! x3 They're just adorable, and I love pairings where the woman is older! ;P)

A pretty enjoyable story to read...Except for the many GRAMMAR errors..The only thing i didn't like was when Sesuke asked why that fox demon did what she did to help them concive the baby; her response SEEMS to me like, she's interested in Sesuke and that the baby has some of her iin it due to her saying that, the baby will have her power or whatever..That kinda bothered me a bit..Esp the response she gave him...Wanting his love or whatever..

I can just pic her TAKING over Naruko body, and i hope you don't PUT my suggestion in your story..It's just what i think..

Very good story..Like the two..Very cute..

OMG!! So many couples! It's so cute (Specially Gaara and Hinata-chan, and maybe Tsunade-chan and Shikamaru), but...What happened to Kakashi-sensei-sama??!! If Anko is wounded, something could have happened to him and the other jounin he went with. Iruka-chan would be so sad if he was hurt!! WAHHHHHHHHH! WHAT HAPPENED TO KAKASHI-SENSEI-SAMA?!?! Also, I've been wondering about poor Sakura-kun. Is she ever gonna recover and get out of the Crazy Bucket? She needs to be loved be cause it would be so very depressing if she died an unloved maniac without any of her friends finding out what happened to her. *Sigh* Good chapter though. It tied up a lot of loose ends lover/couple wise, but you left a really big cliff hanger there. I really hope no one dies. Update soon Trollmia-san~!

whoa whoa whoa that's all i can say i hope you update soon... but no pressure

I.want.to.know.what.happen.to.KAKASHI!!!! You have me laugh and smile all the way to left me with a cliffhanger. Wanna read more!

If you pair up Kankuro with Tenten, I will find you and hurt you. That's just gross. ten ten's evil and Kankuro's is hot. Die plz =[