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Hai your welcome. Glad your updating. I'm sure I can wait a week. Especcially seeing as your busy! ^ ^. Just hurry back and write. I love your story!

awsome I love this chappie even more the yummy solo's and yoshi Finally Gaara kisses Hinata. And your doing the shkia/tsunade yeahs it makes me happy lol

Update soon

Loves Arry

Hej, hej!!
Jo då, du har svenska läsare ^___^ och personligen så älskar jag dina historier!!

Speciellt dina oneshots på naruto, dom är jättebra! Fast de bara skriker efter en fortsättning de flesta av dem, och jag förmodar att du inte kommer att göra några på dom...eller? Snälla? ;_;

Du skrev att du blir alldeles glad på morgonen när du ser att du fått fler recensioner, själv blir jag jätteglad när du har updaterat eller skrivit en ny historia ^__^. Sen är det så kul med en svenska som författar här också.

Hoppas det inte gör något att jag skriver review:n på svenska? Bara fick lust ^__^;;

Lycka till med fortsatt arbete!!

Iruka's reaction is hilarious, really ^^;; And finding Gaara reading a book written by Jiraiya.. *snickers* Sasuke saved him from having massive nosebleeds... Uh, yeah... about the Sand siblings going back to Suna... won't that break some of the pairings? ^___~ Keep up the good work!!! ^__^ Will be waiting for the next chapters...

>>Seto's Darkness<<

more sasunaru!!!!:) I really love your pairings!:) Keep up the goodwork and God Bless you always

Gasp! I've been tuning into Below Zero from the very beginning, just because I love Sasunaru (and most of all, the "typical plots") and I'm just loving how the story is going. Can I just give you a totaly high five for continueing it, I'm a bit of a fanfic writer myself (no one knows, shhh) but I have a giant problem with updating so my stories never get finished. So I'm glad this one is still going.

Another. MY GOSH! English isn't your first language?! I never knew! You write in English better then some of the native English-speaking writers out there!

Awesome. I love your story. Please continue!

_Amanda

OMG! I just love your story! Write more when you can!

Nice excuse Tsunade-sama!

And boys did not… I repeat DID NOT GO AROUND AND GET THEMSELVES PREGNANT!!

LMAO! That was an awesome line!

Lol at Gaara buying that book. Ero-sennin wrote it! Lol

I love this new chapter, I have to say with these types of stories (mpregs) my favorites parts are to see the reaction of the people when they find out that the person is pregnant. I think this reaction is one of my favorites. And your pairings are very unique. The only pairing I've seen before in your story other than SasuNaru is GaaHina. All the rest I've never seen before and they are definetaly interesting. I can't wait to see what happens with those, especially Shikamaru and Tsunade. That one seems the most complicated. But yea....I had one question. How long has Naruto been pregnant. I'm not completely clear on that. You said in this chapter that the whole pregnancy thing started a month and a half ago, is that since he found out he was pregnant or since he got pregnant. Because if it's only a month and a half since he got pregnant I don't think he should be showing already, even if he was having twins. But I don't really know a whole lot about pregnancy. Though if you want a story that goes into A LOT of detail you could look for Chimaera by Shen Long, it's on this website too. I think that one goes into a little too much detail which made it super long, but I think it would be a good guide to go off of. Anyways enough of that. I notice a few grammatical problems, can't think of any spelling problems I've seen. Most of it is with tenses and then places where improper words are used. But it's not so bad that it's distracting. I would suggest getting a beta to check the chapters over. Ok back to the story, are Naruto and Sasuke going to the dance too? Would be interesting if they go and something happens, and it's a nice public way for everybody to find out Naruto is pregnant and then Sakura hears and uses her super crazy driven strength to break out and come after Naruto, because in her mind Naruto stole her and Sasuke's baby and she has to find a way to take it back but they kick her butt before she can do it and they live happily ever after, or at least until Akatsuki comes after Naruto when he's vulnerable:D Wow that was a long sentence. I'm getting a little overexcited so I'm going to stop now before I just go on and on and on forever. Great new chapter, update soon:D

I love the story so far, it must be hard to keep track of all the characters...but I must say, shouldn't Naruto's "parents" be mad that Sasuke impregnated their "son" before they were married! The whole fan fiction lacks that line of thought. Yeah, their love is as powerful as a million stars, but it makes marrage the only opption in their future. Its just the way you portrayed Sasuke and Naruto sounds to me like they would want to be a family.