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for Below Zero

by Trollmia

person Alucard
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW! That wasso cute. I loved that chap.
person LosingGrip
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story, really I do, SasuNaru are just to cute together. I want to ask something, do you think maybe sometime you add a Gaara/Hinata lemon..........................I know I have no right to ask but I just think those two rock and I would so dearly love a lemon for this story about them. Keep up the good work, thanks bye. ^_~
person yurathewicked
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
once again, a great chapter. to review a lot of this story at once:

i really like the tsunade/shika thing you have going on. and all the other pairings are pretty interesting as well. i dont think ive ever read a gaara/hinata or a neji/temari or a kankuro/tenten- but they all work great! nice job! please continue writing this great story. it's very entertaining and i wait for each update faithfully.

ps: sakura can just rot in the basement of hokage tower. mwa hahahaha!
person blisblop
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phoey!I was expecting from the way the chap went to get some Sas/Nar but just another tease.Its..less then amusing at this point.
person Kero-chan
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol YAY!! Sasuke screws his brains out!! XD I love this story.. I've read it like three time already.. please update again! ^^
person Arryelle(Aka. SexGoddess)
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was cute well the smut is great but I really want to know if tsunade and shikamaru are going to be full out lovers I really want them to be. Well update soon again with a real chappie with everybody oh and is gaara and hinata's relationship going to progess anytime soon like to at least a kiss lol

LOves Arry
person Kativa-chan
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol, now I know why Tsunade was laughing. I could actually picture her laughing at that...I laughed so hard when I read that line.
person Seto\'s Darkness
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG SMUT!!! :D Hehehe, that was a very nice filler/interlude because no matter how amusing Kankorou gets beat up by TenTen [I like NejiTen *sniff*], no matter how philosophical Neji is with Temari [I like ShikaTema *sniff again*] and no matter how cute Gaara blushes [I like NejiGaa *more sniffs*] aka, no matter how COOL your alternative pairings are: SasuNaru is still the best!!! :D Hahaha, that made no sense. O____o Anyway... it's still very good *nods, nods* I'm really happy with this story, and I hope you would indulge us more with great scenes/stories and continue this well-written story!!! ^________^

PS: Awww... Sasuke is such a sweet bastard.. He even asked Tsunade-sama about them having sex... So caring... Kawaiiiiiiii *hugs Sasuke plushie to her chest* I really liked the way you portrayed Sasuke to have changed... especially risking his cold-bastard-reputation ^-^

Patiently waiting for the next update!!! :D

>>Seto's Darkness<<
person yurathewicked
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw! so great! i really like the tsunade/shika thing you have going on. and all the other pairings are pretty interesting as well. i dont think ive ever read a gaara/hinata or a neji/temari or a kankuro/tenten- but they all work great! nice job! oh- and about the tsunade/shika thing, i like that, too! :) please continue writing this great story. it's very entertaining and i wait for each update faithfully.

ps: sakura can just rot in the basement of hokage tower. mwa hahahaha!
person Seto\'s Darkness
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! :D The Akatsuki's going to appear!!! *huggles Itachi plushie* as long as my favorite Akatsuki bad guy doesn't harm Sasuke or Naruto [fat chance, I say..] ^_________^ Ooooh, the twists appear!! :D Hehe, dang, and I *heart* ShikaTema too... T___T Anyways, it was kinda short, but I do hope that the action/twists come more in the following chapters!!! Ooh!!! Don't let any harm to come to Kakashi!! :) Y'know, with the mission and that... Sasuke is being his horny, perverted self and his Naru-chan doesn't even notice!!! *laughs*

Keep up the good work!!! :D With all the smileys in my review, I am sure that it's quite clear that I like this fanfic!!! ^____^ More fast updates!!! XD

>> Seto's Darkness <<