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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TSUNADE AND SHIKAMARU!!! THAT'S LIKE THE MOST BRILLIANT IDEA EVER!!! Just so you know! I really really REALLY like couplings where the woman is the older one (and not the other way around as it seems to everywhere, especially in Hollywood-movies... 20-year-old girls together with 40-year-old guys... ) GIMME MORE TSUNADE SHIKAMARU!!! It's seriously the greatest coupling I've ever heard of! Go for it! Full out! xD
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really really really loved it! SO UPDATE QUICKLY!
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. It is going under recomended stories. <3 Haha. I love the Kankurou stuff. XD I can totally see him doing that for some reason. :D
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heehee.... this made me laugh. i don't know why though.
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is hot, a little sappy, but really hot. Keep up the great work.
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! That was so good! I love this fic. Keep up the good work.
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great. well done.
Grammer:
To compare something you would want to use the word 'than', and not the word 'then'
When there is an abundance of something you want to use the word 'too'
Keep up the great work, I love this.
Grammer:
To compare something you would want to use the word 'than', and not the word 'then'
When there is an abundance of something you want to use the word 'too'
Keep up the great work, I love this.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the fact the sex didn't come to a crashing halt and Naruto doesn't turn ultra femme like alot of other fics do to him in this state...women in real life don't do that,why would a guy?(if the women are proffesional shoppers they might go more femme,anything to buy more crap)Remember ,at heart a mother has "protect" written at the core of her/his nurturing skills,this is a strong impulse that can lead to bloodshed easily, some may choose to hide their claws with ribbons but never doubt they are there at thr ready.Pregnancy sex is great,the pregnant person is alot more sensitive physically and much warmer and tighter inside(less room,more blood going through the body even at an early date and mucho hormones).So I am looking forward to more of the hot if sentimental sex.Yeah,Sasuke should get Naruto to top him so he still feels like a guy and not a sexless blob of a container.As you will of course.Thank you.
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are doing great just keep going!!!!!!!!! xD urgh this is so good! ^^x
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad chapter, i love Sasuke's reaction to the news, I am dying to see how Naruto finally reacts (now that he realizes it) to being a Mommy XD I lub those two XD TenTen and Kankur...whatever, is a cute pairing but het gives me goosebumps...and not in the good way. *feels sick* Anyways yeah, i look forward to more XD