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for Below Zero

by Trollmia

person Jadejj
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's getting good. Can't wait to see what happens next...
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!! Naru-chan is finally showing signs of being pregnant!!!!!!! Gaara is finally with Hinata-chan!!!!!!!!! Neji is pursuing Temari!!!!!!!! *cocks head to side and looks confused* Eehhh?? And what about Sakura??? What happened to her???? and Iruka and Kakashi?????? are they still together?????? and what about the rest of the rookie nine???? Where are they??? GREAT FIC BY THE WAY!!!!!!! I just love it! and the usual updates are awesome! *pouts* can't say the same about my fics... Anyway, can't wait for the next chappy! UPDATE SOON!
Much Love
~koolanimefreek
person exrxr
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what do i think???? well, only three words will do: I LOVE IT!!!! this is just the greatest sasunaru fic i have read. dam! it's like every chapter has a sasunaru lemon scene (REALLY love it) and i hope you continue this.

hm. . . hinita and gaara eh? never read a fic on that pairing but i think it'd be good (hehehe gaara is being perverted).

can't wait for the next chapter to be up! keep it coming!!!!
person Kativa-chan
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol. This is the first Mpreg story where I read that Naruto has 'motherly' instincts. Meaning making the nest and stuff. Lol, I love preggy Naruto!!! Awesome story.
person Kaiyo No Hime
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, Naruto's nesting habits are so in-character that it's awesomely funny.

Great job with the fic, I look forward to the next chapters. ^.^
person Celen
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the best fic I've ever read. And I truly mean that. All is on it's place; Sasuke and Naruto together (oh, I so love that pairing), your writing style (it'a just great, I hope I could write as well as you do, you are the best writer in internet!), characters (they are really IC, I don't believe my eyes when I'm reading this, they are just like Masashi's originals)... Everything. And I can't wait the next chapter! Please, PLEASE write it soon! I beg you!
person Celen
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I was about to forget: this story is just so cute! So utterly cute! <3 You write all those emotions so well, this is so touching and sweet.
person vashta
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Let it grow!!! I like it, Gaa/Hin yay!!! I have always loved that pairing.
person ku
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tumbs-up* best chapter!
person bookworm51485
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked your new chapter, but I did have one problem with it. The part where Naruto and Sasuke meet up with Gaara and his siblings. I don't think Naruto would have been buddy buddy friendly with him if they hadn't seen each other since the exams when Naruto beat him, but I also don't think Naruto would ask if he was safe. Because in doing that he's kind of treating Gaara the way other people have always treated him, like he's a monster that people need to be wary of. I don't know if that was the way you meant it to sound, but that's the impression I got. And that doesn't really go along with the impression I got of Naruto and Gaara's relationship from the anime/manga. Anyways I just think Naruto would have been a little more understanding of Gaara since he has to face a similar attitude. But yeah that was pretty much the only problem I had with the chapter. The rest of the chapter is all good. Neji and Temari is a pretty original pairing, wouldn't mind seeing that. And I love stupid insane Sakura locked away getting zapped everytime she goes near the bars. It's great. OK that's all. Love this story, when's Naruto getting pregnant? Update soon:D