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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU!!!! You update and i love authors who update! keep updating if you ever need a beta reader I am here 4 you! i check my email every day! my e-mail is Narutootaku@hotmail.com
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sakura kun? kun is used for guys. attaching it next to sakura's name seems just.. wrong. you should use san. or chan. lol. ok besides that, everythings good
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was hot... *drools*
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo i like. update soon! i'll be waiting. if you dont update, i'll stab u wid a knife a billion times over and over again. ^_^
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hint gaa/hyuuga? i like gaara and i want him to be happy. DONT MAKE HIM A BAD GUY CAUZE I LOVE HIM! now sakura bashing.. thats more like it. (i hate sakura)
i also like the fact that you made hinata a pretty cool char. in this story. i am hinata fan also. but never wid naruto. :D naru/sasu all da way!
i also like the fact that you made hinata a pretty cool char. in this story. i am hinata fan also. but never wid naruto. :D naru/sasu all da way!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that chapter had me rollin on the floor great work very great keep up the great work and update soon
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait for mor echapters update soon because this is amazing
When does Naruto get pregnant??
When does Naruto get pregnant??
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter -- I really like how you've chosen to portray Hinata, and I agree with you about the possessive thing, lol. It's nice to see her as a mature young woman rather than just a shy kid all the time, ya' know? ^^ Again, very well done -- keep up the good work!!!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your version of Hinta very much. I can see her being scary. Lemon soon?
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah Hinata.Strong Hinata and lusty Sasuke,great material.Funny chap.