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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY you updated!! I lovies you! please continue with your fantastic story!
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAY! I love Hinata-chan too! And she issoo cool in your story! (glomps you) Keep writing!
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey
I love your story, love Naruto mpregs though there aren't a whole lot out there and a lot of them are incomplete. So I hope you finish your story. I really like the way your writing the story, Sasuke and Naruto together is so cute and Hinata being scary and sweet at the same time is so funny. I can't wait til they get to the part where they all find out Naruto's pregnant. Is that going to happen soon or do we have to wait for a few more chapters? I was also wondering if you were going to have more than one baby. I read one story where the person decided to take the Kyuubi fox thing really to heart and had Naruto have 9 babies. I think that's a bit overkill, so if you were planning to have multiple babies I would suggest 3 at most. Anyways you really don't have to listen to me cause it's your story and your doing a really good job so far on your own so I'll leave with a good job and please continue.
I love your story, love Naruto mpregs though there aren't a whole lot out there and a lot of them are incomplete. So I hope you finish your story. I really like the way your writing the story, Sasuke and Naruto together is so cute and Hinata being scary and sweet at the same time is so funny. I can't wait til they get to the part where they all find out Naruto's pregnant. Is that going to happen soon or do we have to wait for a few more chapters? I was also wondering if you were going to have more than one baby. I read one story where the person decided to take the Kyuubi fox thing really to heart and had Naruto have 9 babies. I think that's a bit overkill, so if you were planning to have multiple babies I would suggest 3 at most. Anyways you really don't have to listen to me cause it's your story and your doing a really good job so far on your own so I'll leave with a good job and please continue.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All this romance from a night of coldness!!! ^___________^ happiness!!! I really, REALLY support/love/adore/worship the pairing SasuNaru--so YEAH!!!
I find it really funny [i think it's chap 2] where Tsunade sent out Chuunins/Jounins to make sure that nobody interrupts Sasuke and Naruto [man, stalkers!!!] LOLz
I love your story--I hope you update soon!!!
btw: I like the way you portrayed Hinata -- sweet, innocent, dangerous [esp. when protecting her friends]!!!
PS: burn Sakura in hell!!! XD hehehe, is it NOT obvious that I *abhor* SasuSaku??? actually, i also dislike Sakura... ^________^
anyways: keep up the good work!!!
>> Seto's Darkness <<
I find it really funny [i think it's chap 2] where Tsunade sent out Chuunins/Jounins to make sure that nobody interrupts Sasuke and Naruto [man, stalkers!!!] LOLz
I love your story--I hope you update soon!!!
btw: I like the way you portrayed Hinata -- sweet, innocent, dangerous [esp. when protecting her friends]!!!
PS: burn Sakura in hell!!! XD hehehe, is it NOT obvious that I *abhor* SasuSaku??? actually, i also dislike Sakura... ^________^
anyways: keep up the good work!!!
>> Seto's Darkness <<
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm a fan of Hinata too! Anyway, love the chpater!
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yayyy cute cute cute!!! love the fluff ^o^
sasuke is so protective an' soooooo teasing!!
but how will you make it to get naruto pregnant, i wonder...naaah keep writting like this!!!
by the way love your hinata! but sakura yewwww >o<
psyco
I know..my review are not very constructive or helping...
sasuke is so protective an' soooooo teasing!!
but how will you make it to get naruto pregnant, i wonder...naaah keep writting like this!!!
by the way love your hinata! but sakura yewwww >o<
psyco
I know..my review are not very constructive or helping...
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I usually slink away after reading, but when you said that reviews give you the strength to continue, well, those word stopped me in my tracks. I want you to know that I really enjoy this story and the way you're writing the characters. Hinata is stronger than she looks, Sasuke is there for Naruto, and Naruto regrets that he can't have Sasuke's children. Kakashi and Tsunade are both ready to take a stand for Naruto, and Sakura, even though she's the antagonist, isn't hated by everyone. I like that you explain what the Kyuubi is planning; most authors explain her actions after the characters find out about the pregnancy, so this is a pleasant change.
I don't know a lot about pregnancy, but I think the earliest that a woman would start showing is three months. But I'm not positive on that. (I probably should just keep my mouth shut. ><)
I don't know a lot about pregnancy, but I think the earliest that a woman would start showing is three months. But I'm not positive on that. (I probably should just keep my mouth shut. ><)
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THEY WHERE MAKING OUT ALL DAY AND YOU DIDN'T SHOW US ANY OF IT ! sniff.I'm offended.sulks off......
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great please update soon
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much! It's so comfy and very refreshing, at least that is is how I feel when I read it. Keep it up!