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for Below Zero

by Trollmia

person Kaiyo No Hime
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was so cute! I really love this story, and can't wait for the mpreg to scare everyone!

/me waits excitedly for next chapter
person Pink
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!!! I like where the story going!!But your right you should work on you BXB Action.. But still the story is good!! I realy liked it!!! Its sooooo Sweet!! I'll make sure to finish reading this story sooooo UPDATE PLS.!!! I'll be waiting!!!! Can't wait to see HOW will Naruto will react when he finds out his pregenant and Sasuke and the others tooo I want to know there reactions!!!
PS:
Just a sujestion can you kill Sakura here I don't like her getting in the way of Naruto and Sasuke's Relationship!!!
person GFIE
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no dont worry. the...erm..sex wasnt lame. it was actually a really big turn on. *blush* I think my nose is bleeding....shit. lol. well i can already pretty much guess what Kyuubi is going to do. and im pretty sure that you can guess what my guess is. wow, that was confusing wasn't it. well i hope you update soon! because this really is a very good story.
person fan
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw!!! So cute!!! Great story, very kawaiii!
person yukiko
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww ... future mpreg ^^ And sakura is insane O.o She'll probably try to kill naruto if she know he's pregnant
person yukiko
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still like your work, stop saying it's bad, I know I can't do better okay !!!!!

You writed it, it's good. One day I'll show you my babies *crakles evilly*

Anyway, more bitchy!sakura please !!!!

And superuke!naruto !! and maybe .... mpreg ? I love those ^^ and some irukaka please !!!

I'm asking to much ^^;
person bhodi li
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
umm..yup..she is totally whacko..Go psycho Sakura...where did Naruto and Sasuke go??? *sigh* Sasuke is such a sex crazed machine..hehehehe...waiting for updates =) *eagerly*
person Rai
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa o___o
I love this fanfiction!! Man experiment? my experiments are garbage. :P
Ah, Another reason to hate sakura. lol J/K (I really cant stand her actually o__o; )

Cant wait for the next one ^^

(And I know they can use kun for boys, but I also believe the reason they caleld tohru; tohru-kun is because tohru is a boys name... ah *shrug*)
:P
person chi no hana
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woooo! luv it! can't wait to see som SasNar action! and som Sakura-bashing!
person Carrot
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well THAT was an adorable story! I loved it!^-^, it's nice to read a story where you get to hear the characters thoughts. It helps make sasuke seem like less of a jerk-off in the manga and stuff(even though he ant around right now...bastard...)...eeek! i love you for writing this cute fanfic!^^