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Hey, I liked this! I love the sweet lovey Naruto/Sasuke stories! Can't wait for the next update!

Well, it's good. I always enjoy a good SasuNaru when it's well write! I can't tell you about english mistake coz I'm only french but I can tell you that "Sakura-kun" is not correct coz' -kun is use for young boy, it's Sakura-chan or Sakura-san (more polit, consider as a adult). Good muck for the next! Ja!

Very nicely done, even if the plot line is a bit cliché! I really like your descriptions and characterizations, and you have a nice mix of angst, sensuality, "cute-ness", and a touch of humor, too. Also, for English not being your first language you have done exceptionally well -- there were a few grammar/spelling mistakes (as is to be expected) but they were the ones that most people struggle with, so they were easily "overlooked" or "read around", etc. ^^ In short, this fic is quite entertaining and well-written, so I look forward to reading more in the near future. Keep up the good work!!!

even if it's a used idea, like you said, I still like it.

And even if the plot is the same, the story is different, you're going into sap, not really agnsty and rom,antic, those are my favorite.

I except from you a bitchy!Sakura sweety, and a deadlysweetuke!naruto. And maybe an ooc!sasuke.

give me your worst !! and some humour

I like what you did with the first chapter, that was a great set up. i can't wait to see what happens next. this is a very sweet story.

I really like it! Like you said, it's similar to other stories but I think you've done a good job of making it different enough to be your own. I really like Sasuke in this story too. He's cold, but very likable. The story I'm writing would be a lot better I think if I had stuck more toward what you're doing! If you ever need a grammer beta I would love to help. I have an awful lot of free time on my hands!

ohhh..i think it's such a cute story..i hope you do continue. i just briefly read it and it's cute. I will go back and look more in depth for the grammar. I do like the hints of Sakura's obsession that is the beginning of a great story cuz Sakura is psychotic. Even though the story has been done before, the Sasuke and Naruto here are very thoughtful people, just don't make Naruto too clean and stuff. Great Job!

Does "try" mean one-shot? B/c this story is way to good not to complete it. Besides there is nothing wrong with reusing a formula if it works. :)

keep it up

Damn, are you a moody person, or what...? You author notes on the end of your stories are a bit snappy. Try to lighten up a bit. You don't have to throw in chocolatecookies like the rest does, but a bit more happy, please? *pleading eyes*
As for the story; It's great! Sasuke and Naruto should always stay in a sleepingbag and do the naughty. *snicker* And yay for kakashi for knocking Sakura out. No matter what and which story, the girl works on my nerves.
Well, I haven't found any grammar mistakes yet, but English isn't my first language either... so I probably missed them.
nah, I'm gonna wait for an update. I'm really curious what Sas and Naru are doing. *perverted gleam in eyes* ^__^V

whoa..you update fast. i just read the first chapter, then whaddayaknow, the 2nd chapter suddenlt appeared! i am rather puzzled how Iruka knew about the boys' activity in the onsen, but i thought Tsunade giving orders and everybody cooperating was really cute. kekekeke.