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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hihi...and exhibitionnist Sasuke! Interesting !
Great story! Hinata and Gaara..great Idea!
Great story! Hinata and Gaara..great Idea!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! One of the best I've read in a long time. A baby with 2toned eyes, cute.
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read this great story over a year ago, and just wanted to tell you that I love it. I have just finished re-reading it, and it is one of my favorite, complete, fanfictions.
You are an amazing author.
You are an amazing author.
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wahhhh!!! That was so absolutely wonderful. THe entire fic was just so...it had my dog throwing me nasty looks because I kept waking him up with my squeels. Wee, it was just, I loved it. You may not feel confident about every part of the story, but I honestly did enjoy every chapter. In fact, I think you may have just swayed me once more to the wonderful, lost world of Het...it's been a while. Wah! But honestly, I loved it. Thank you very much for the wonderful read.
Keep typin'
Keep typin'
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Hokage-sama, this is just the thing we've been waiting for" (when Tsunade learns that "her little Naruto was getting frisky in the springs with Sasuke" in Chapter 2)
*snickers* When I read that part, I was thinking -in chatspeak, which I usually don't- "OMG Something big happened! Sasuke finally put the moves on Narunaru! Or vice versa. ^^
*snickers* When I read that part, I was thinking -in chatspeak, which I usually don't- "OMG Something big happened! Sasuke finally put the moves on Narunaru! Or vice versa. ^^
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ive only read the first chapter but i had to say that i love how made kyuubi a girl ^_^
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the way they act seems REALLY out of character. they are not THAT nice to eachother all the time and the story just seems so boring without the constant conflict between them. -_- try harder next time.
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you're a sick person to pair up Shikamaru and Tsunade, but the story is nice
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The writing was fabulous, every chapter kept evolving in the sense of description/imagery and dialogue. However I found this story boring somewhat. There was barely any conflict and no main problem, how can you call this a story? You portrayed characters nicely, and completed this fic with 28 chapters, good.
But...
Point is, this story was anticlimactic, you built suspense (which was why I kept on reading) and I thought you might have done something unexpected or built an obstacle for Sasuke and Naruto, but there was none at all. You may have thought that the choices of adding one were cliche but...it's better to have cliche than none. I was disappointed in the lack of action (as in something spurring). If I had to draw Below Zero on a graph it would be:
------ A flat line. Nothing interesting happened. There were lemons (also written neatly) but where's the plot? Just Anko? Smut + Plot = Awesome Story. You had no plot therefore I cannot say this was an awesome story. Actually 'Below Zero' is not good nor is it bad, just not good.
But...
Point is, this story was anticlimactic, you built suspense (which was why I kept on reading) and I thought you might have done something unexpected or built an obstacle for Sasuke and Naruto, but there was none at all. You may have thought that the choices of adding one were cliche but...it's better to have cliche than none. I was disappointed in the lack of action (as in something spurring). If I had to draw Below Zero on a graph it would be:
------ A flat line. Nothing interesting happened. There were lemons (also written neatly) but where's the plot? Just Anko? Smut + Plot = Awesome Story. You had no plot therefore I cannot say this was an awesome story. Actually 'Below Zero' is not good nor is it bad, just not good.
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, this is SO CUTE.