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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story a lot. Though no offence it could use some corrections. I couldn't stop reading it. It is going to be on my favorite list.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I must say that I greatly enjoyed this fic a lot. It is the longest fic that I've ever read. I really like the pairings and I must admit that you have caused me to become addicted to the Gaara/Hinata pairing. I do have one question though. I noticed that a lot of people complained about the earlier fics that there were a lot of misspellings and grammatical errors. If this was the case than why didn't you just get a beta reader?
Dryad1789@hotmail.com
Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2.. and already, so FREAKING kawaii! I think I my face is already permanently paralyzed from smiling. I don't care what's said about this storyline being overdone, this is so freaking sweet. Awww, their first time? Just awww. I don't feel like there's enough limes like these at all. Onward with the next chappie. I'll hold any other squeals until I reach the end.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What happened to Hikari
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!! IT IS ABSOLUTELY THE BOMB!
YOUR SMUT AND LEMON ARE GREAT. YOU ARE MY IDOL!!!
YOUR SMUT AND LEMON ARE GREAT. YOU ARE MY IDOL!!!
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!! i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so so so so sooooooooooooo sweet!!!
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I DNT WANT IT TO END!!!! why god why? eh-anyways i luved ur story and im sad to see it end but it was just so beautiful*breaks down into a fit to tears* your story was so beautiful*sobs uncontrollably* i wish it didnt have to end.
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you werent that bad at the sex scene seeing as how this is only your second male/male story and unless you are a gay male then writing a fanfic about 2 guys having sex is probably goin to be lacking in the details but all in all it was good and you got your point across so congrats on it(trust me soon you will be able to write m/m lemons with so much detail that anyone reading it will be able to picture it clearly in their minds). i luv ur story so far cant wait to finish it!
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was an adorable story
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yo! Heh, your story was sweet. That's it really. I enjoyed it greatly. ^_^