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for Below Zero

by Trollmia

person Anon
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i absolutly love it!!!!!!!

I have loved all of your stories so far but this one has to be one of the best ones ever!!!!!!!!!

Please update soon!!!!!!!
person ki-ka
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh....love love ^-^ ...i hope sasuke gets his wish...now would be a good time for oro-chan to come back from the dead -dunn dun dunn- -_- damn..0_o who put the oro-teme-chan theme song on...this is my cue to get out of here...love love and hope you don't have any roadblocks or writercrashes ^_^...ja-ne
person Usagi-chan
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LURVS U FIC. >< ITS SO ADORABLE.
person lilruto
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please let the baby be a boy with black hair and cerulean blue eyes neways don't let the story end like this cause it getting to interesting please keep it going on for as long as you can but i like the story alot
person cibiboy
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is great i read ch 1-28 in 3 days because of school and stuff wouldent it be great if they hade twns a boy and girl well update soon ok.
person Anon
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Erm... The Nine Tails is a male... Not female.
person Beautiful_nin
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! I friggin love this story, it kept me tryin not to laugh the entire time!!!!! I hope it's not over yet,
though!!!! It better not be!!!! Grr.... Would a cookie help? Plz keep going!!!! Your an awesome writer!!!!

~me
person 2 tailrd kitsune
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please write more ill check in every day . i cant wait till the kit is born hehehe ja ne ^_^
person Stupidity Unleashed
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this fic soooo much. Though I didn't really care for most of the pairings (kiba x shino, shika x tsunade, neji x temari) I truely enjoyed your writing^^ One thing that you should work on is your subject-verb agreement. For example, you once wrote "Sasuke and Naruto was" wjen it should have been "Sasuke and Naruto were" and stuff like that. It really made me feel warm and fuzzy when Sasuke was so conserned about the baby and gave Naruto belly rubs. Also, I laughed my ass off when Sasuke had the baby-born doll strapped to his chest XD It was so cute. Btw, I've been wondering if Sasuke and Naruto were going to be married...and whose last name would they take? Well, no matter. I hope you had a happy new year and will update soon. I've reffered some of my friends to you fic, btw. Congrats.
person Kagaya
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so fluffy. Yay for fluff ^_^
I love the fact that Sasuke and Kyuubi is so overly protective of Naruto.
That really melts my heart.