rate_review Reviews

well that was fun. i like the chakra play you used. i think the idea of more chapters is a great one. i hope that made sense. anyways thank you for creating this story.

i really loved your fic! it was super enjoyable and the whole macho, one-up-manship vibe was really funny and sexy at the same time. hahah, im almost surprised they didnt just whip 'em out and compare sizes rather than weapons...hohoho plus the title was good. so many ppl write crap titles. i like "Weapons Check" im sure i could even imagine layers of symbolism in there if i wanted to, haha. please keep up the good work and always choose writing fanfiction over homework, chores, jobs, and deadlines!! lol, jk

Keep going! This story is awesome!!I would really like to see more chappies!

Hahaha. I love it! I love your writing style, it's unique and you used it so well with this story. The sex scene was also amazingly done. Great descriptions and intensity, not to mention your characterizations of the two boys were so well done. Awesome job! <3

this was a great ficcie. i think it ends pretty well here, though i wouldnt mind more hot action in the onsen. hm...

on that note: please write lots more narusasunaru yaoi love! you're a great writer with great style- your sex scenes come off very well, too. :D keep up the great work!!!!

All I can really say is that this story did a most thorough job of revving my motor. Holy. Freaking. Crap. If you do keep this story up I'm going to have to invest in a lot of ice...though given your style of writing, I think that's a sacrifice I would be okay making.

WS (gathering the bathtub of coldness)

Greatest Naruto lemon ever.

that was a totally awesome story, every chapter was incredible. I am so jealous that you lived and studied in japan. It is my dream to do that. May I inquire as to why you studied paper making? Anyway if you add to the story that would be great and if not, it was a wonderful read.

i'll admit, i just about fell outta my chair laughing the first time i read this through. i enjoy your sense of humour deeply! shared it with my writing friend and she had a good giggle over the erm...last weapon location. ^_^ i also liked the little touches such as "The famed speed of the Konoha ninjas, honed by perverts." and naruto's bad joke about the tree falling. AND the image of kakashi handing tsunade the photos. whether or not you write that out further, the idea is just funny. a picture worth a thousand yen, indeed! MUCH fun, all around. plus...the hot kinky chakra sex was damned fine! *happy hentai purring* the world NEEDS more ninjalicious hot kinky chakra sex! *nodnodnod*

lol, you have definately got to continue this. its fricken hilarious.