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This...this is brilliant. This is so freaking brilliant perfect I do not have *words* to describe it. Seriously. I'm just reduced to o_o "guhbibble". I've drifted away from the fandom not by lack of interest, but by frustration and pissed-off-ness at the poor writing and characterizations--and then by sheer chance I follow a link to this. And it's *perfect*. Hot dang, someone's finally given me a 'way it could be' that really leaves me feeling good about my favorite pair and their chances for someday fixing things. Yeah. I so have to save this when I get home so I can reread without it someday disappearing off the web. I can't believe I could have missed something this good. What a perfect combination of humor and hotness, of rivalry and the just-right way of these two acknowledging how they feel for each other. Gah, I'm rambling. But wow, I was *so* happy with this. Thank you.

"So, if a tree falls in the woods, and no-ones around to hear it, does that mean the sex was good?"

Falls of her chair laughing and bruises her very abused butt. You're amazing, you know that? I liked the imagery, the realness, of the fic. Looking extremely forward to reading more. *Camps in front of your doorstep, waiting.....*

I think you could end it safely...but you could also coninue with it if you wanted, either is good.

Haha, tree. Souveneir. Ah haha...
You should definetely expand on this, but maybe they should go to the onsen. I have no idea how they would get rid of all the cum though. (thinks) Huh. Maybe they should just go to Sasuke's house after all...

Great job. You've obviously read enough lemons to pull it off correctly, and they still held true to their characters.

The only point I'd like to make is that it is highly unpleasant if the loosening fingers have long finger nails. I can only imagine what it woulf feel like with claws. Just for future reference.

Continue it or stop it, I'm still looking forward to your next work.

i like the idea... new! i'm going to go read the rest.

P.S. if you want to read my fic named Red Walkways please do! ONLY READ THAT ONE IF YOU LOOK FOR ME ON FF.NET! my other fics are the result of a missguided youth... sigh. on this site thats the only fic i have. i update on firdays and and working with a new beta so will be fixing mistakes (there are some), also many of my chapter are prewritten so the results of a new beta will be lagging untill i get back to editing chapter 1-4. wow... i rambled... sorry.

i'll go read now...

Sami

That was awesome! I mean really! The imagery was fantastic and absolutely incendiary. I loved every moment. I think the only typo I spotted was you wrote 'sez' instead of 'says' right at the beginning. One woops is very good. I'm impressed you don't have a beta. I do! :) I am going to go see if you have other works now. Nice work and a lovely read.

Teehee! Nice little Omake there. It was definitely hilarious. I love your vivid descriptions and definitely your "use" of Chakra. You have a valid point that it isn't used hardly at all by most. Maybe Cecilia and I will have to take that into account in our future writings. Hmm...thanks for the food for thought. Lovely, lovely chapters! And I'm glad I helped. ^__^ Please keep writing whether it's this story or another!

kyaaaaaa!!~

that was tooooo BLOODY HOTT!!! XQ____ _ _

I love uke sasuke !!!XD he's soooo cute !!! also your right not much (naruto seme sasUKE) fics on the net nowadays which sucks i dislike naruto uke with PASSION
! >___< uke sasuke uke sasuke uke sasuke!!!!!!!

please write more write more you will right !?!

you # fangirl faith----

p.s i love you write more
pp.s vive uke sasuke the most ukiest uke eva

Huge grin.Blissful reading that was.Great fun.Sooo I want to read more of your pairing but whether its in this story or another is your call.I'm good either way.Tsundae is so a pervert,inspite of the mammeries I do not find her a bit maternal so the bet is a given as far as i am concerned, good call.