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Absolutely smashing, my dear. Fantabulistically wonderlicious. I loved it. ...........and no, I haven't gotten much sleep lately, in case you're wondering. ^___~ My e-mail service is still acting up, so although I got your e-mail I was only able to read half of it before my computer gave me one of these annoying "problem pop-ups" and then crashed. Such fun, let me tell you. >.< But anyways, I'll reply to your e-mail ASAP, and I really do appreciate the fact that you sent me one in the first place. It's nice knowing that my reviews are actually read, much less given any thought. ^^ I really liked the "chapter preview/snippit" thing at the end of the page -- I agree that this would be a suitable ending, but I hope that you choose to continue the story, none-the-less. As always, the chapter was quite well done, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future, regardless of whether it's part of this story or not. Keep up the good work!!!

Ah, this is my review to chappy 3: Wow! Nice! Do i ever just love a dominant Naruto! Fun with chakra! YAY!
And you are an Illustrator! I see now where your passion for description comes from. One must be able to see in the mind's eye what one wishes to express. Or perhaps I am just rambling... In any case, you are devine and superior at writing quality blowjobs! Bravo!
To MultifacetedTune: Sheesh! Always pointing out my flaws!! Hee hee...well, it is what i don't pay you for, isn't it?? XD
Oddly enough, that same bastard English teacher recommended me to be a tutor, but lacking faith in my own abilities, I had to decline. And I DID learn something from his class! The fact that I don't know how to use commas properly, what a "linguist" realy is, and that a "Honey Wagon" is actually the truck that drives around to farms and cleans out the vats of hog shit! My professor said that he smelled of shit so badly all the time, his family wouldn't let him sit at the dinner table with them. O.o Why did I even bother typing that silly bit of dribble? My apologies to the author! Well I'm not going back and erasing it!! I took all that time to type it, might as well leave it there! *glomps MT*
Back to this story: Really, you don't need a jack ass like me telling you it's good. I'm sure you know it already. That book you mentioned, I'm not familiar with it. Who is the author? I love a good book as much as I love a good blowjob! See you in chapter...5?

*laughs*

That first chapter was fantastic. Aside from various spelling errors and some netspeak (says not "sez"), the chemistry was great and the humourous bits were well executed. I admit there was a big grin on my face. Look forward to more, and hope the characterisation stays true :)

Long live writers capable of maintaining a sense of humour while writing beautifully crafted (and generally very hot) smut. This was such a lovely read, and so very different from the usual fair that crops up after scouring the internet for hours in search of decent fanfiction. I think you've restored my faith in the genre. You have a fantastic economy of language, packing a world of meaning and emotion into tightly wound and expertly articulated sentences. And throughout, you maintain such a firm grasp of the world these characters inhabit. I simply can't say enough about how fond I am of the complexity and humour colouring all of the interactions between Sasuke and Naruto. The dynamics of power and lust shifting between them are also incredibly inspired. Brilliant work all around. I look forward to what's to come.

I think that YOU think far too highly of yourself, giving so-called "lessons" about how much Japanese on a fic is enough... and even daring using "fancy" words and think you're SO CLEVER because of that. Truth is, you make me sick to my stomach. You criticize too much and your fics aren't even good! What's up with that?! I'm sure you can give your opinion on how a story could be better, but wouldn't it make more sense if YOU followed your own rules? I'm sure it would. Though if you insist on criticizing, at least be a little kinder and try not to contradict yourself (saying that you don't like Japanese on fics and yet saying that "-ne", a VERY Japanese and VERY not acceptable word that isn't any better than the infamous "Aishiteru"s). I'm not saying I don't AGREE with you on certain things, such as that I particularly don't like Japanese on fics, but the WAY you expose some of your points are just... not nice.

I think you should get a nice, clean mirror and take a very good look before saying some things about others. I'm saying the same faults you condemned on yourself, although you may NOT have spotted them yet.

Don't worry about the note. I definitely understand where you're coming from, and I have trouble reading fics like that as well even if they do have a good plot. Hopefully, my own writing is getting better in that regard as well.

As for that stupid internet speak, I hate all of that stuff also. *instert rant here*

Looking forward to the next chapter, and thanks for the response.

Linguist. WOW.
I used to want to be a lingust, back in middle school... But it fell apart. It fell apa-aart.
Oh baa-by... Goodness, I'm listening to Moby again. Very sorry.

Whoa, why did I just click that dumb "review" button?
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Anyway, very good work! The effort you put in is very much appreciated, especially your "ninjalicious nindo." -__-;; (Yeah, I have no idea as to what you actually wrote. Something-ninja or other, up in the A/N, pertaining to how cool the Naruto world is and how we should write more about it.)

PS: If I read one more bad fanfic in the next hour, I will swear to the Big Thing Up There that some of these writers are still in grade school. (Yes, it is your fabulous fault that I can no longer digest trash. ^^)

I am at a loss for words. I do not know what to say, but wow. I mean it I am going to put this on a lj group I post at.

*is laughing her ass off* Oh...*gasp*...my god.....ha... *still cracking up* ...give me a...haha...minute..... *dies laughing* ...... *is revived by some unknown force so that she can finish her review* OMG, that was a classic!!! I don't know what was funnier: "Putting the uke in Sasuke since… um. Well, since yesterday." or "So, if a tree falls in the woods, and no-ones around to hear it, does that mean the sex was good?" ^0^ *still laughing* And you know, I kinda' feel sorry for the tree.......... *continues to chuckle while she grabs a tissue to wipe away her tears* Ahh......thanks, I needed a good laugh. And the fact that it's 3:30 in the morning probably has something to do with it, too, now that I think about it......... Isn't insomnia fun? ^___~ Thank you so much for the quick updates, as well as for keeping your fic consistantly entertaining and well written. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!