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this is very good. I like what you did with the whole power theme, that was hot!! I hope to see more.

That....was.....soooo....funny!!!
Please write another chapter! I just kept laughing harder and harder as they pulled out more and more weapons
And just for curiosity's sake, what was the final count?
LOVE YA!!!!!
Kai

*chuckles* Yeah, I would recommend that they move those "knives" and such before they go any further... unless they intend to say pressed up against that tree, that is. Or they could just go inside... that would work too, ne? ^___~ I'm sorry that you have insomnia, but your readers aren't TOO upset, trust me. And thanks so much for the quick update! Again, great characterization of the two "boys", and excellent descriptions. You also have a nice balance between your use of text and dialogue, and it makes the story much more engaging and easy to follow. ^^ I have to go now (ahh, college stuff -- fun, ne?) but I look forward with eager anticipation to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!!!

Hot tamales. Always a pleasure to read from an author with proper vocabulary and grammar. Looking forward to more.

Whoa! Five alarm fire! Very hot, the anticipation is killing me! Please continue soon.

This is fantastic! I love this story! Very funny, very passionate, and really great to read! Can't wait for the next chapter!

OMFG! LMFAO! that is so funny! *cracking up on the floor* you've GOT to continue

"So, if a tree falls in the woods, and no-ones around to hear it, does that mean the sex was good?"

That's the best line EVER!!!! Go Naruto, it's your birthday, not for real real, just for play play
Please keep writing!! I LOVE YOUR NINJA WAY!!!!
LOVE YA!!!!
Kai

Wow...

I'm trying reeeally hard to think of something else to describe this, but I think "wow" pretty much sums up my thoughts. Oh, yeah, throw in an "OMG" or two. The very last weapon check had me just staring at the computer screen dumbly. I was thinking there was no way Naruto would put something up there, but then again, he is the number one ninja at surprising people. Ha! I was most definitely surprised. And Sasuke asking if that was why he was always jumping around...oh, my sides still hurt from laughing at that.

And should I even mention the kissing? It was hot. The descriptions were awesome; everything played out in my mind as if I had been watching a movie. The colors of the chakra, the buzz of power surging through the air and flowing between Naruto and Sasuke...

...it was just great. I can't say much more about this except that it is extremely well-written, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. But it is still relatively early here, so my brain is not quite awake yet. I'll quit before I continue rambling on and on.

I can't wait until you post another chapter. I'll definitely be looking forward to it!

Wha ha ha ha! Only Naruto would think to hide weapons up there. Sasuke never stood a chance.