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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was an great story. you so should continue it cause there just isnt enough good kibaxshikamaru stories!
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you continue on. There are so few chapter stories featuring kibaXshikamaru. Most are one shots... please continue on for us kibaXshika lovers...
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea of where you got this but wherever it is... go there again. It was simply too good. Good flow, no grammatical errors (that my brain bothered to register) and a great plot. If there'd be a second chapter I'd definitely read it. Either way... great story and please keep up the good work.
And why not a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year while I'm at it?
And why not a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year while I'm at it?
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, more is welcome!!!
It was hot, sexy, and sweet all in one package.
Arg...more would be awesome.
Looking forward to more of your writing.
-Touya06
It was hot, sexy, and sweet all in one package.
Arg...more would be awesome.
Looking forward to more of your writing.
-Touya06
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you're still contemplating a second chapter for this fic because it really is begging for that second chapter. ^_^ You wrote it very well, and I like the mundane and predictableness of Shikamaru's life. I don't think I could offer any suggestions, though, because I thought it was good and enjoyed it a lot.
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Second chapter, second chapter, everybody begs for a second chapter!!!
Hehehe, this fic was good. The characters were in character, the sex was hot, the end was sweet, what else could we ask for? Oh, and I loved whiny Ino, poor poor Shikamaru.
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Hehehe, this fic was good. The characters were in character, the sex was hot, the end was sweet, what else could we ask for? Oh, and I loved whiny Ino, poor poor Shikamaru.
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, fantastic story. *Hoping for a second chapter*
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is an excellent story very well written and I hope you decide to write the next chapter ^^
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You best write that second chapter! OMFG!!! Friggin' awesome - and I don't usually give compliments (or reviews for that matter) freely! Contine ... please? ::insert eyes as disproportionaly large as those of Bambi here:: Pweeeeetttttyyyyy pwease? BTW, feel free to email me to bounce ideas or whatever, 'kay?
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please please write that second chapter. There just isn't enough KibaxShikamaru smut (or anything for that matter) out there. It's a pleasure to find an author who doesn't make me wince as I read. Keep it up.