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for Artifical Lover

by blurredoasis

person Tweedleedee
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh PLEASE write a second part!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

This was great, by the way... And Good Things come in Three, too. Please write the second part to that, too!
person shawna
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it !!!! HOTT!!! i love kiba/shika sexy bitchs
person Xephyr
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okaaaay! That demands a second, third, fourth, hundredth chapter! Please write more of this! I never thought Kiba/Shika was cool, but you've shown me the error of my ways! Neato! More, for reallys. You have to. OMIGOD, if you don't I'll die. Thanks for writing this!
person Luckdragon
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more. People need to understand what a smex god Kiba is, and Shikamaru is beginning to grow on me as well.
person griDbug
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write it!!! *dies* i MUST know dammit! :P it'd be soo good if there was another chapter XD
person shit and smiles
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please put up another chappie!!! ITz Good stuff ::grin:: =]
person Nightmare
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I absolutely loved this! Not only the pairing but your writing style and description is to die for! And you're most certainly right. This story begs for a continuance. It's a crime to just abandon it here since it has so much potential. I don't know how much free time you have to work on this, but I really hope you at least consider adding more. You have written a very interesting and enthralling beginning to what could be a truly great story.

Hoping for the best
Nightmare
person YukoKiba
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_o
I love you.
Please, please, write another chapter. This pairing needs sooo much more love.
person eyes0nme19
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot and really interesting...looking forward to the next chapter!!
person Karista
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I usually don't like Naruto M/M pairings, but this one intrigued me so I gave it a shot. I found it quite enjoyable, intense enough to keep me interested without skimping on the plot. It was very well set up and removed enough from the Naruto-verse's storyline that I could read without disturbing my grasp on the cannon. Great writing, you've earned my first review on a M/M Naruto story!