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for Dying Inside

by KaiyoNoHime

person Anon
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh i love it. please write more SOON! love sasuke's attitude and iruka.
person Church
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE WOOTNESS AT LAST!!!!
person Hypnotic
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
;_; oh how cruel you have to update this very soon. I want to know whats going to Happen to Naru-kun. I'm so worried, please let him be ok!!! update soon please.
person silverfox
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG this is such a sad sad chapter god i alomst cried just reading it plz plz let naruto be okay and make sasuke stop being an ass well i'm really enjoying htis fic keep up the great wokr and update soon
person Fizz
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOH! Nice story! Me likes. But I wouldn't kill off Naruto just yet. Like expand the relationships, Sasuke's feelings...blablbal (goes off on mindless ramble)
I think its cool. Keep up the good typing y'all :P.
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah....

I am lost at what exact disease it is, since there are thousands of them....

Could it be T.B.? The lungs, the fever, the weakness....

What about cancer? Stomach, lung, throat, brain, liver, bones, blood....it's endless.


Thanks for writing an interesting story, keep up the great work, coolsa.
person MeLaiya
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaahhh come on what happens next, what the hell happens next. I NEED TO KNOW!!!
person Saer
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this sory, each chapter leaves me on the edge of my seat, and I ant figure out what is wrong with Naruto! It's driving me crazy, please update soon! SAER
person Church
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES THE UPDATE WOOT
person chi no hana
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you;re killing na-chan. monster. heal him! and then get some hot ass gorgeous dude to nail him good!!!