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for Dying Inside

by KaiyoNoHime

person silverfox
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooo how mean wat happens next hurry and update
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's another angsty chapter ! -_-
And I don't know what frighten me more :
kakashi uncoolness in the situation, a sobbing sasuke or the poor Naruto dying T-T ?

Please ! don't kill poor Naruto, pwease *puppy teary eyes o0-0o*

Please update soon !!! ^-^



person Crimson_Revenge
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! Please don't kill Naruto! I CAN'T deal with that!! I wish Sasuke would care more about him than wanting to beat him in a fight! WE KNOW HE LOVES HIM, DAMMIT!!!!! PLEASE update soon!! DON'T kill Naruto!!!
person Ru-Shin
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*jump up into the air and gives a whoop* That was awsome!! :D Sasuke sobbing was a little OOC though. :/ I think he'd be a little broodier and perhaps say some angry things. *shrugs* But I don't mind the OOC-ness. Just makes me want to huggle him. ^^

Poor Naru-chan...:( I hope he gets better eventually.
person bookworm51485
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if there was any chance of you changing the ending or were you planning to leave it the same?
person himeyume
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MEAN cliffhanger grrr oh well .............. i still want to know what is naruto sickness..... tell us on the next chapter....... pls pls ok update soon and keep up the good work
person redfox9t
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great but still very short please update soon
person silverfox
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahah gotta love a mother hen i'm really enjoying htis fic keep up the great work and update soon
person Deli-chan
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story and I hope you update soon. It's too bad AFF doesn't have author alert...
Anyway, continue writing, your story is superb!!!
person Tamara
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank you for mentioning me in your story i feel so special ^_^
i have a feeling that there is going to be a little trouble for Naruto and the others...
when you say for the title "Dying inside" is Naruto going to die in this fic...if he does i'll be very sad...this is a really good fic and i hope you update soon!