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for Dying Inside

by KaiyoNoHime

schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it, so is it cancer?
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
--Chapter Three--

I remember reading this story somewhere at some time, but I cannot tell you how ecstatic I am to see it posted once again. Even though I know what will happen and everything, I still cannot wait for the next chapter to come out. I love how you portray the emotions and truly make this into a work of art and not just a story.

Looking forward to the next update,

--Dhampir
person himeyume
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to know what kind of sickness naruto have..... ooooo and make sasuke hehehhe worry about him a little hehehe i hope u update soon keep up the goood work!!!!
person Church
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
at least ders not yaoi good thng just slight
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I will the next chapter now !!! T-T

Please update soon !!! ^-^
person Church
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOO this one is very interesting dude ITS SWEET!!!!!!! i cant wait for updates ima keep checking back everyday
person Tamara
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank goodness this isn't aids i thought i was....this is a very well written story and i never really saw an topic like this in naruto fics so i can tell that i'm going to like what is to come from this story..please update soon!
person TenshiKaitou
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when you say illness, i was thinking of the suggested rape scene before and somehow got this freaky idea that the illness is AIDs...Omg, hopefully I'm wrong, very wrong. And Sasuke he sounds evil. What does he means that something that can be use against Naruto. Darn. So, please update!
person Kyouta
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, very nice so far! I love the angst of Naruto's past (whether canon or new) because you can do so much with it. ^_^ I'm looking forward to your next chapter, keep up the great work!
person DancingKitsune
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I read this on fanfiction.net, so I'm guessing yer the one who wrote it there too! xD that's awesome. I like this fic lots, but fer everyone who hasn't read it and are readin the reviews I'm not gonna reviel anything...xD; meh whatever. Please update this soon, and same with RotL! [I lurve that fic to bits ::nodd nodd::